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Veronica8 hey could you also give an honest feedback on my novel too.... There are not many chapters yet so I'm not looking for a review... Just want to see my own novel with someone else's perspective. thanks
Name : Everything Matters or Nothing Does
Here's the link to it https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12870189705745405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4304414066

PeachyPearl Sure. I'll take a look.

Veronica8 Can you spare me a little time of yours. I really sucks up in grammar. Can you please check it out..
Title: Tales of the Supremes
Author: MyCharacterLeads
Thanks in advance..

Veronica8 that would be great :)

MyCharacterLeads Sure. I'll take a look at the summary and first chapter.

Veronica8 Thank you so much.. Any suggestions or recommendations will be much appreciated..

MyCharacterLeads I've gone through the summary and first chapter. The link below is the feedback. Key points to keep in mind are to avoid mixing tenses and dialog tag closures. Otherwise, you're doing well. I hope my ramble reads well. Let me know if have trouble opening the pdf.
Cheers :smile_cat:
https://tinyurl.com/y2neanva

Veronica8 Thank you so much.. I also learn from the explanations.. Really a great thing...
I really appreciated it... I really do!
Thank you a thousand times!

Veronica8 Fellow Daoist!! Can you a review to my novel too?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13137109705815905/Bleeding-Brilliance

Thanks

NewCultivator Sure. I might not be able to get to it straight away, probably next few days. My life got boringly busy.

NewCultivator I've finished doing a quick proofread as mentioned. Here is a link to my feedback.
Key things to keep in mind is closing dialogue with the correct tag format, when to capitalise nouns and reading flow. Otherwise, most of your writing was on the mark. Proofread feedback

Keep writing. :smile_cat:

Veronica8 More like I wanted you to review the story like your thoughts about the story, or any suggestions or comments on some parts.

NewCultivator Oops. Sorry about that. I was offering proofreads here.

If you need help with editing try Grammarly, it can help with many issues.