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MyCharacterLeads Sure. I'll take a look at the summary and first chapter.

Veronica8 Thank you so much.. Any suggestions or recommendations will be much appreciated..

MyCharacterLeads I've gone through the summary and first chapter. The link below is the feedback. Key points to keep in mind are to avoid mixing tenses and dialog tag closures. Otherwise, you're doing well. I hope my ramble reads well. Let me know if have trouble opening the pdf.
Cheers :smile_cat:
https://tinyurl.com/y2neanva

Veronica8 Thank you so much.. I also learn from the explanations.. Really a great thing...
I really appreciated it... I really do!
Thank you a thousand times!

Veronica8 Fellow Daoist!! Can you a review to my novel too?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13137109705815905/Bleeding-Brilliance

Thanks

NewCultivator Sure. I might not be able to get to it straight away, probably next few days. My life got boringly busy.

Veronica8 haha Take your time!

NewCultivator I've finished doing a quick proofread as mentioned. Here is a link to my feedback.
Key things to keep in mind is closing dialogue with the correct tag format, when to capitalise nouns and reading flow. Otherwise, most of your writing was on the mark. Proofread feedback

Keep writing. :smile_cat:

Veronica8 More like I wanted you to review the story like your thoughts about the story, or any suggestions or comments on some parts.

If you need help with editing try Grammarly, it can help with many issues.