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I'll take a look.

I am very proud to receive your review. If you are willing to visit my story :

Title: The Saga of A Mage Family
Links: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834909906612205/The-Saga-of-A-Mage-Family
Synopsis: Tyas is a product of joint experiments between earth science and Iocyania magical technology. Previously, Tyas was just a monkey lab. Now that the evolution has been complete in a lab scale, Tyas has a physical body that is not much different from the magical girl in the city of Mage, except for her tail, which traces her origins. Because of this, she was allowed to roam in Iocyania, the planetary home of the mage.

Prof. Jack adopted Tyas as his daughter, along with other abandoned children they found. He was teaching them mathematics, science, Earth modern pop culture, MMA and even Earth superstition.

While the Magus, Meyrlion Titan appointed Tyas and her foster sibling to be his primary students. Teach them all the top-notch mage sciences in Iocyania.

Without Tyas and her family realizing, the era in Iocyania would undergo a drastic change. War on the national struggle, hunting of natural resources and magefuel and global warming will be the toughest challenges for them to survive in Iocyania.

Without them knowing it, a large hole had appeared in the Iocyania atmosphere, due to the use of forbidden magic sigils.

And the fire of the challenge was slowly targeting their residence in Mount Luwa, and the cities of the mages: Magetan and Magelang City.

      Shameless plug.

      Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11724532206492105/Brutal-Journey-of-an-Unfortunate-Female-Heroine

      Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.

      Leave a comment on how I could improve, advice is much appreciated!

        I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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        The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care

        Synopsis-

        I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.

        Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.

        I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.

        Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.

        Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.

        But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.

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          _White I give a shot to your first chapter and its very good, I will read your novel :)

          If you can give a shot to mine too ;)

          ttps://www.webnovel.com/book/12710924906772005/Mercenary-Startup

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              Happy to do a swap review (I review yours, you review mine) with you. Let me know if it's ok. My story :

              To My Sunflower
              Historical fiction, boys love set in 1945 Japan about the end of WWII, told from two perspectives of same-sex lovers Hinata and Eiji.

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                  Title: Broken Caged Heart
                  Genre: Romance Fiction
                  Author: mvphoenix (me haha)
                  Synopsis: Greed , Money, and Power. Is this all that matters? Why does the world revolve around them? Why is it that they are important to everyone? If this is what the world has come to I want to be excluded.
                  This world is filthy. Is it worth living in such a place?
                  I am so stupid to think that I could live cleanly in such a world. I'm so unlucky.
                  The darkness has touched me.
                  Can I still hope for love?

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/13041938605448705/Broken-Caged-Heart

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                    14 days later

                    Try reading Historical Novels such as 1. Shadow Princess
                    The employed Empress

                    These stories are quite impreasive and funny specially The employed Empress.... Well if you are interested you can just add them to your library😁😆 as for the shadow princess, this story is very heart wreaking😆😆 Hope you like mine...._White

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