90751052 Happy for a swap for To My Sunflower

Keen to know whether it's too slow or fast out of the gate. I always thought pace was my thing, but well, the digital age and all.

I was surprised when some readers here commented on Zaldizko being too fast, since I beta the hell of it to be fast after the major complaint by beta readers (15x BR) was too slow and too much backstory XD

So, keen to check the pace before I self-pub this one.

Let me know if you're up for it. The first few chapters will be fine.

Cheers :smile_cat:

    Title: My brother's friend
    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12373423206351105/
    Genre: Romance fiction
    Synopsis: Tang An is a high school student about to graduate. But everything changes when her brother's friend moves in. Battling with trauma from home, she tries to overcome her family challenges but when an unknown secret is exposed, can Tang An survive its consequences or will she die at fates hands?

    Note: For anyone who leaves a review, comments, votes or rates my book, I'll reciprocate. And if you do, just leave a reply here so that I'll know. Have fun and I hope will be able to help ourselves.

      StenDuring Are you open to review a BL? I wouldn't mind a review for To Like A Man. I receive a lot of comments, but haven't had a review yet. Let me know if you're up for it.

        Veronica8

        In queue. With this I close my queue.

        Edit: I don't care about genre or subgenre. I've even rated 'I felt so good about being raped I fell in love with him' even though that premise made me gag. BL is normal, loving your rapist is not.

          StenDuring I felt so good about being raped I fell in love with him'

          WTF!? Seriously? :eyes:

          Back to review. I'll start to read yours now, since you have a lot of chapters :smile_cat:

            I'll give all of your linked stories a quick review, just let me add everyone to my queue and get through it all. If someone else wants to be review swapped for the first few chapters, let me know. I'll give honest reviews, but I'm not a mean dude, so I'll try and point out several GOOD things, along with maybe one thing you can improve upon.

            Don't take my word for gospel, though, I'm also just an up-and-coming author.

            Current queue: 90751052 @Veronica8 Sapphirechelsea237 yunisao

            No one has to review me back, but if you'd like to, I'd very much appreciate it. I'm trying to push past the 10 reviews minimum in order to have an overall score show. I'd prefer honest reviews in comparison to WebNovel's average. I know my release frequency may cost me a point or two, and I'm working on that. :D

            Title: Embrace the Ether
            Genre: Fantasy / Light Sci-fi
            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11703863906480505/Embrace-the-Ether

            Synopsis:
            To burn away the old, rebuilding it anew.

            Countless years ago, a terrible war came for the ancient Primordials, casting down their once believed immovable dominance and securing the rise of a new empire. The Ether was fractured, broken into numerous pieces as peace was hard-fought.

            Thrown into this new hectic land, Deus must come to wield an unexplained power, one that threatens both his sanity and life simply to use. If he wishes to survive, he must learn not only how to harness this strength but how to grow and expand it, altering the path of those around him. What he doesn't know is that he's found himself involved in a terrifying plot hosted by those demons of old, a game of sorts to decide the fate of Midnight.

            Does Deus have what it takes to survive, or has he found himself trapped in a plot he has no hope of escaping?

            *** Thanks again to whoever does review me, and I hope you enjoy my story. It's a bit slow in the beginning, as I've been told, but that's also something I have scheduled as a later-fix.

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