I read that there are some triangles in this place - wandering monks ...

"Yes, it is governing, it is!"

I am writing two novels related to the Silk Road.

The first part - 'Jiang' Magic Coin - events of the times of the era of Sir Pei Ju, the times of the Tang Empire.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12206220906090705/'Jiang'-Magic-Coin

And the second part - Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition - about the descendants of the main characters of the first part.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13599217205409305/Magic-Farmer-Dara---2nd-Edition

A lot of material. More ideas. But with the first part. until I can write a sequel, the author is not sure where to turn the story.

In the second part, more understand.

Grammar - not really, obviously there are mistakes. Style - documentary fictitious realism.

I hope to get a review and tips on how to improve the story.

For my part, I will also write reviews, what I see in your novel, my opinion. Just a look from the side allows you to better understand the strengths and weaknesses of the story.

    New to writing webnovels and I am not the best writer so feel free to give me some feedback that will help me improve!
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/14395215405206105/Peerless-Lovers

    synopsis:
    Ling Daiyu is the worlds most deadliest assassin. More like deadliest human weapon! She is not your ordinary assassin. Something about her seems different. Perfect at everything, High intelligence, beautiful, emotionless and cold. This is what she lives for! Then what makes her so different from other assassins?

    Feng Huan is a filthy rich business man. A billionaire. Handsome, intelligent, perfectionist, workaholic and cold. There is not one person that dares to offend him. No one can melt his icy heart. Or is there? His life turns upside down when he meets Ling Daiyu.

    These people are perfect for each other!

    When Ling Daiyu is right in front of death’s doorstep, Feng Huan saves her life. With nowhere to go, she decides to follow Feng Huan and becomes his bodyguard while trying to live a somewhat normal lifestyle. Finally feeling emotions and enjoying her freedom, people from the organization she belonged to start showing up. Will she be able to carry on this new life? Or will she have to go back to that traumatic place...

      An arranged marriage to a perfect bride.

      To keep him in line, playboy Deive Hontiveros needs to marry Callea Lopez so he could start his own business. He thought he got lucky when he sees how beautiful and caring Callea is.

      She lives in a haunted mansion though and he got plagued by a mysterious ghost of a woman and her cat from hell.

      He must protect his bride at all cost.

      But what if Callea is one with the darkness?

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/14424574405304905/Moonlight-Bride-English-Version

        Lucy Wickshire
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        To those left behind,
        I wish to inform you that the child, Lucy Torgenn who goes by the name Lucy Wickshire is drifting into light realm, and might already be sleeping in one of the cities as this letter arrives you. Accompanying her is a stable boy from the west villages of Juhntt. A young man, he may be, but he is not to be underestimated. It seems the hope that she stay silent after the lower realm belt killed her mother was for naught. A child not yet thirteen she may be, but has forced king Larken to give her a dukedom, scaring the nobility of Juhntt into silence while managing to seem a child to her father ignorant of his daughter’s true face.
        You are about to read the accounts of Lucy Torgenn of Wickshire and the millions of bodies burning as a backdrop.
        https://m.webnovel.com/amp/book/10446790405035105

          This is not so much a novel as it is a compilation of thoughts that I have sometimes, not that interesting for some people. This is just a novel where you can come and post your thoughts, not about novels and such but about life. You can comment on some of the things I've posted if you're a little confused on what I mean, some of the things I've thought sound a little childish to me(Such as the ending of Thought 5-Tired of Hurt) and I regret posting it but I need to get some of my own thoughts out of y head and onto the page so; here I am. Anyway, if you need to get some thoughts out of your head and need to talk to someone who is not some cookie cutter patronizing therapist, I'm here and maybe there will be someone else who will understand your pain; someone who has actually felt your "pain". I put quotations because sometimes it's not pain, but numbness or complete lack of pain or emotion. Anyway, that's all, here's the link.

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/14277994305847005/Feelings-Daily-thoughts

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