I read that there are some triangles in this place - wandering monks ...

"Yes, it is governing, it is!"

I am writing two novels related to the Silk Road.

The first part - 'Jiang' Magic Coin - events of the times of the era of Sir Pei Ju, the times of the Tang Empire.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12206220906090705/'Jiang'-Magic-Coin

And the second part - Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition - about the descendants of the main characters of the first part.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13599217205409305/Magic-Farmer-Dara---2nd-Edition

A lot of material. More ideas. But with the first part. until I can write a sequel, the author is not sure where to turn the story.

In the second part, more understand.

Grammar - not really, obviously there are mistakes. Style - documentary fictitious realism.

I hope to get a review and tips on how to improve the story.

For my part, I will also write reviews, what I see in your novel, my opinion. Just a look from the side allows you to better understand the strengths and weaknesses of the story.

    New to writing webnovels and I am not the best writer so feel free to give me some feedback that will help me improve!
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/14395215405206105/Peerless-Lovers

    synopsis:
    Ling Daiyu is the worlds most deadliest assassin. More like deadliest human weapon! She is not your ordinary assassin. Something about her seems different. Perfect at everything, High intelligence, beautiful, emotionless and cold. This is what she lives for! Then what makes her so different from other assassins?

    Feng Huan is a filthy rich business man. A billionaire. Handsome, intelligent, perfectionist, workaholic and cold. There is not one person that dares to offend him. No one can melt his icy heart. Or is there? His life turns upside down when he meets Ling Daiyu.

    These people are perfect for each other!

    When Ling Daiyu is right in front of death’s doorstep, Feng Huan saves her life. With nowhere to go, she decides to follow Feng Huan and becomes his bodyguard while trying to live a somewhat normal lifestyle. Finally feeling emotions and enjoying her freedom, people from the organization she belonged to start showing up. Will she be able to carry on this new life? Or will she have to go back to that traumatic place...

      An arranged marriage to a perfect bride.

      To keep him in line, playboy Deive Hontiveros needs to marry Callea Lopez so he could start his own business. He thought he got lucky when he sees how beautiful and caring Callea is.

      She lives in a haunted mansion though and he got plagued by a mysterious ghost of a woman and her cat from hell.

      He must protect his bride at all cost.

      But what if Callea is one with the darkness?

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/14424574405304905/Moonlight-Bride-English-Version

        Lucy Wickshire
        Sensitive document

        To those left behind,
        I wish to inform you that the child, Lucy Torgenn who goes by the name Lucy Wickshire is drifting into light realm, and might already be sleeping in one of the cities as this letter arrives you. Accompanying her is a stable boy from the west villages of Juhntt. A young man, he may be, but he is not to be underestimated. It seems the hope that she stay silent after the lower realm belt killed her mother was for naught. A child not yet thirteen she may be, but has forced king Larken to give her a dukedom, scaring the nobility of Juhntt into silence while managing to seem a child to her father ignorant of his daughter’s true face.
        You are about to read the accounts of Lucy Torgenn of Wickshire and the millions of bodies burning as a backdrop.
        https://m.webnovel.com/amp/book/10446790405035105

          This is not so much a novel as it is a compilation of thoughts that I have sometimes, not that interesting for some people. This is just a novel where you can come and post your thoughts, not about novels and such but about life. You can comment on some of the things I've posted if you're a little confused on what I mean, some of the things I've thought sound a little childish to me(Such as the ending of Thought 5-Tired of Hurt) and I regret posting it but I need to get some of my own thoughts out of y head and onto the page so; here I am. Anyway, if you need to get some thoughts out of your head and need to talk to someone who is not some cookie cutter patronizing therapist, I'm here and maybe there will be someone else who will understand your pain; someone who has actually felt your "pain". I put quotations because sometimes it's not pain, but numbness or complete lack of pain or emotion. Anyway, that's all, here's the link.

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/14277994305847005/Feelings-Daily-thoughts

            Title : So, Humans Were GODS All Along?

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14433988606416405/So%2C-Humans-Were-GODS-All-Along%3F

            Synopsis: The ‘Power of Creation’ had always been a power available only to the Gods. The sole power that made them seem invincible.

            The ‘Power of Creation’ was just a trait that manifested in the race that called themselves ‘Gods’. It was neither an object nor some source of energy.

            All lives prospered under the Era of the Gods, resources were plenty, health conditions were at the very best, and life blossomed. All except the race called ‘Humans’. Humans were almost at the very bottom of the power structure, food chain, etc. Their survival was difficult.

            Countless hardships, a millennium of preparation, and finally, a forbidden ritual. Humans obtained the ‘Power of Creation’ and became the ‘Gods’ themselves.

            Harnessing the ‘Power of Creation’, humans created various tools, technologies, medicines, etc and became the dominant race on Earth.

            10,000 years had passed since then. Humans had entered the Silicon Age and geniuses sprouted like cabbages. Every day, new technologies were developed, medicines researched, weapons created and new frontiers of the vast space explored.

            Finally, on one fine day during our glorious era, humans finally exhausted the ‘Power of Creation’ that they stole from the Gods.

            How will humanity survive from here on?

            If anyone wants to do a review swap, just @ me. I'll give you a proper review.

              https://www.webnovel.com/book/14376214406229405/The-Soldier-Turned-Hero
              Colonel Shepherd was in the midst of a mission while He was covering the retreat of his comrades that's when he was hit by a stray bullet and died or He should have but he awakened in another world and the first sentence that he heard was "All Hail The Hero"!!
              This is the story of a Soldier Turned Hero!
              Witing for the first time neeed some help with feed back :)!!!

                Title: The World seems Realistic but Why do i have a Leveling System?
                Genre: Magical Realism
                Synopsis:
                " Hey, can you give me tips or advice regarding studies? "

                " It's unbelievable that you have such strength with that kind of body. "

                " Damn! Are you some kind of Godly Player? Where did you learn all those skills?! "

                " Your cooking is the best after all! Ah~ Wait! Let me finish this first— "

                " Your supernatural power, that is something that I needed. Capture her! "

                " Having such power yet you were fine with a normal life? What a waste. "

                In the viewpoint of others, I am an abnormal existence. Yes, not abnormal human but existence.
                I can learn all kind of skills, not even the hellish homework from school could stopped me.
                What? Do you think that's not good enough? Forget it then.
                Anyway, what I'm going to say is, Ever since I have got this Leveling System, My life took a sudden twist.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/14446778905377805

                  If you're looking for a completed Tagalog Novel, you can check my first novel here in Webnovel.

                  https://m.webnovel.com/book/13877660805908305
                  Genre: RomCom
                  Synopsis:

                  Katie doesn't have a permanent address because the world is her home. She travels for work and she doesn't want to settle in just one place.

                   She also has no intention of falling in love because it will only prevent her to do the things that she wants. Besides, she doesn't want to be left alone in the end, like what her parents did.

                  But it seems like that notion was about to change when she literally bumped into Colin. It was the first time in a long time that she went home but why did the universe allow her to be with someone so annoying and so full of himself?

                  If she doesn't need something from Colin, she could've turned him down when he asked her to be his girlfriend, but she does. She needs him big time.

                  Katie is confident that she can pretend to be his girlfriend so well. What she can't do is to stop herself from falling when she started to know him a little bit more.

                  It turned out that Colin wasn't so bad at all and the more she's with him, the more she realized how beautiful he is as a person. How can someone be so completely different from what he lets other people see?

                  Katie finally fell for him because of how he cared for her truly- the thing she looks for a guy the most.

                  But when she realized how much she loved Colin, Katie finally received the news she had long been waiting for. How can she leave the country if the only place she wants to be is beside him?

                    I'm going to promote as well hehe ( ง •̀ 。 •́)ง

                    Title: Somehow (One Thing Led To Another)

                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14372926105133505

                    keywords: school, comedy-romance, reincarnation, modern

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                    Synopsis:

                    The one and only Young Miss of the Song Family, Song Areum, envied those who always had something going on in their lives.

                    What’s the point of having money when life wasn’t that exciting?

                    She must have lost count on how many times she had wished on shooting stars.

                    And then she realized, ‘why wait for it to happen when I can do it myself?’

                    The amount of people that suffered under Song Areum’s boredom couldn’t be counted with one’s both hands.

                    "Your friend found out that you’re dating her boyfriend? It’s done by me, thanks. You don’t have to pay me now though, just sign an IOU and we’re good."

                    "The school’s flower is caught having an affair with our homeroom teacher? Done by me."

                    "Sending me such tainted pics? I’ll help you inform the school and your family about your actions. I know I’m such a generous person ╮(╯ ∀ ╰)╭"

                    •

                    Yang Jihyung was what anyone could ever dream of:

                    Rich? Check.
                    Smart? If you don’t include foreign languages and sports, the
                    n check.
                    Attractive? Check.
                    Kind? Che- let’s move on to the next part.

                    As much as the school admires him, Song Areum knew better than not to.

                    Ahh... but that failed somehow.

                    One thing led to another and now she’s involved with some type of feud with different people. Additionally, that damned dreamboat seems to have casted a spell on her.

                    On how Song Areum plans to manoeuvre throughout this whole thing, well she’s just going to wing it ╮ (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) ╭

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