Post your #61 and #62 Contest Stories here!
All stories added for those that said what prompt it was for~
Review queue is still open if anyone’s interested.
My story for WPC #62
The One Who Was Reborn Into An Ash Tree
{shortened synopsis} By the junction at the main road, opposite the boardwalk from the city park, stands an Ash tree.
At first glance there is nothing significant about the tree, however there are rumours that if one was to wish on the tree for success, they were almost guaranteed it.
While the rumours are baseless and untrue, the tree is magical for two reasons.
One, it can read your mind. Two, it used to be human.
Basically (because I’m bad with synopsis writing) it is about an Ash tree that knows it used to be a human but has no memories about their past life or why they became like this. It also possesses the power to read minds and so spends its days observing humans. The story follows what they see as a tree, obviously getting into their past life in a (hopefully) unique-ish way.
Man, I should’ve chosen a more interesting name than half ass it XD
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Writing Prompts Contest 62:Become a tree
Hi Guys,
Just started writing a novel I hope you could read and leave few comments ,
Novel name : The Tree of Oxon
Oxon the Supreme god who created the universe in which countless mysterious races live.His ultimate creation is known as The Universal Tree that has power to grant any wish with in the universe.
The search for universal tree was begin with the evolution of intelligence of the races, countless war's and battles, schemes and betrayals happened within the universe to find the tree........
Chryiss please try mine
Jayanhari Commented on each of your chapters.
JoannaAngel05 Ok, I’ll check it out!
And I see that you have Lee Min Ho as your avatar ;)
JoannaAngel05 Done! I probably should’ve just given a review in a form of a chapter by chapter analysis considering that’s how my longish comments were like.
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Writing Prompts #61
Thank you for this thread! I will now shamelessly promote my story here, haha!
Title: “Stuck in a Novel: A Game of Love and Fate”
Synopsis: Ysara Leonor’s life could be perfectly described by the words similar to ordinary, normal, and simple. But that life of hers turned upside down when she finds herself stuck in the famous novel of Laro ng Tadhana (A Game of Destiny), a book written by her deceased grandmother.
And the only way to escape is to finish the story of the novel. But there’s a catch: she has to make the villainess of the story the one who gets the happily ever after.
lelelei I don’t see any cover, but even on the story website there isn’t any. Maybe the cover image didn’t upload correctly?
As for writing tips, the best is to read other stories and the informative reviews. Then you can see what’s good and what can be improved, and then apply it to your own story. Lastly, read up on proper English writing on the web for the grammar part.
Chryiss I would appreciate it if you could review mine :)
Novel here
Chryiss I saw it all thanks alot
lelelei Left some feedback on your story in comments and a review.
GrumpyNeighbor That link actually doesn’t work, but I just used the one you gave before. Review done as well as left some comments.
Chryiss Thanks!!! :)
My story for wpc #61
Love? Friendship? All fake.!!
Please support
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13352635805524705/35844728494806429?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4302736760
GrumpyNeighbor Thanks for the return review! I didn't expect it since I was just giving these out to help others~
Samayra_Akhtar Added your story to the top post, and I left a review for you too~
Chryiss
Thank you
Just hit the 10k word requirement today, whew~! It seems like auxiliary chapters aren’t included in the count, so if anyone has them, make sure to have an extra 10k outside of the auxiliary ones!
Chryiss I'm new to writing on webnovel and was wondering what auxiliary chapters were. Do you mind explaining it to me, please?
Also, I've found prompt #62 to be intriguing, so I decided to choose that as my first story.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13397048705670505
A review over it would be much appreciated, as I'm trying to improve myself as a writer. If it is ok, I would enjoy reading your review over it and I can try the same with your story. Thank you :)
I'll review your if you review mine... though they honestly couldn't be more different from each other
FeatherlyDuck Auxiliary chapters are basically part of volume 0, so they don’t count as part of the actual story. For example, if a book has a map, it doesn’t doesn’t count as the first page. The same goes for indexes. I made an auxiliary chapter for readers to refresh their understanding of system details, much like an index or literary map of the system and world.
Since I offered on this thread, sure I’ll read yours and give a review.
TwistedWhimsy Different is good haha. Although I can’t say it was due to my originality that mine is unusual. Okay, I’ll take a look and review~
TwistedWhimsy Left a review and some comments too~
FeatherlyDuck Good story for a first start at writing on here! I left a review of my thoughts~
1 Day left.
Can't believe two weeks went by like that!
Chryiss thanks for the review!
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Chryiss Hi! Thanks for writing a review on my story, I appreciate it! I'm taking the things you pointed out and am currently trying to implement them. Also, I've read your story as well and have left a review!
@TwistedWhimsy I'm going to write a review for your story soon and I hope you can offer some pointers to me too!
Many thanks to both of you and best wishes =)
FeatherlyDuck Thank you! Your review was a nice little surprise after I posted chapter 13. :D
This is my first time writing a system novel, so I was concerned about the leveling and stat aspects and tried to minimize repetition. I'll definitely be taking your review points into account!
Hi I have joined contest #61, this is my first time writing here. Please review and support. Thanks
Novel name : Peachful revenge - in horror and thriller genre.
Chryiss Thanks for your reply.
Peaceful Revenge
Synopsis Standing at her belcony of her 20th floor 2200 sq ft apartment, having a cup of coffee Nini is just thinking. The stars can't be seen in the night because of bright lights of the Vientiane City.
This city is a 24 hours running, ruthless, fast life metropolitan city. No one has time for anyone, no one care of anyone.
But Nini is living her life with an aim. A dengerous aim to seek revenge for her dead mother and brother and
Her father and younger brother whom she does not know where are they. Even though she knows she could be arrested any time after taking life of those people whom were responsible for her mother and brother's death. She is still looking for the person whom she needs to clear her debt off. She just knows her mind would be peaceful after getting justice for her family.
But is revenge peaceful after taking it?