TwistedWhimsy Left a review and some comments too~
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FeatherlyDuck Good story for a first start at writing on here! I left a review of my thoughts~
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Can't believe two weeks went by like that!
Chryiss thanks for the review!
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Chryiss Hi! Thanks for writing a review on my story, I appreciate it! I'm taking the things you pointed out and am currently trying to implement them. Also, I've read your story as well and have left a review!
@TwistedWhimsy I'm going to write a review for your story soon and I hope you can offer some pointers to me too!
Many thanks to both of you and best wishes =)
FeatherlyDuck Thank you! Your review was a nice little surprise after I posted chapter 13. :D
This is my first time writing a system novel, so I was concerned about the leveling and stat aspects and tried to minimize repetition. I'll definitely be taking your review points into account!
Hi I have joined contest #61, this is my first time writing here. Please review and support. Thanks
Novel name : Peachful revenge - in horror and thriller genre.
Chryiss Thanks for your reply.
Peaceful Revenge
Synopsis Standing at her belcony of her 20th floor 2200 sq ft apartment, having a cup of coffee Nini is just thinking. The stars can't be seen in the night because of bright lights of the Vientiane City.
This city is a 24 hours running, ruthless, fast life metropolitan city. No one has time for anyone, no one care of anyone.
But Nini is living her life with an aim. A dengerous aim to seek revenge for her dead mother and brother and
Her father and younger brother whom she does not know where are they. Even though she knows she could be arrested any time after taking life of those people whom were responsible for her mother and brother's death. She is still looking for the person whom she needs to clear her debt off. She just knows her mind would be peaceful after getting justice for her family.
But is revenge peaceful after taking it?