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Astrarche @Asphant
I will do yours! Can u review mine?

Title-YOUR BETRAYING LOVE
Synopsis-
“One day you're going to remember me and how much I loved you… then you will hate yourself for letting me go.“ ...

Is it a crime to fall in love?
Rosella had never thought that she would be trapped in a web of politics, lies, deception, and misunderstandings.
What she wanted was love but received only pain and betrayal.
It is the story of a broken Empress, of her struggles inside a place full of ruthless schemes.

"How could you give me to any other man, I waited for you so long ! Did you ever love me or not?" asked Rosella

"You know darling! everything is fair in love and war!" Nicholas smirked.

"I wish that we would have never met in this lifetime and I pray, that we will not meet each other in the next one" screamed Rosella...
Even if I fall in love with someone new, it could never be the way I loved you...

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/YOUR-BETRAYING-LOVE

Feel free to give suggestions. Thanks! :)

Asphant

Hi. Do you mind doing a review swap with me?

New Life: A Second Chance <-- clickable link

You don’t have to read all the chapters (there’s over 100). Just enough so that you can get a feel of it. If you actually like it and keep reading, it’s an added bonus! (✿ ‿ )

ILLYAchan I read your story, I liked the build-up, it certainly has potential. I do advise for you to take and editing app as the grammar was off, or otherwise I'd be happy to do it for you - don't worry I never charge. Let me know what you think?

Are you by any chance interested in doing a review swap with me as well? links

Sigheti I'll do a review swap with you anyways, thanks for reading my story! I'll pay attention to the grammar and will edit it haha >.<

I'm really happy someome has read my story!