stella2138 the chapters are kinda short but it’s not a bad story and kinda feel like if you had a forum for book updates ch.12 wouldn’t really be necessary

      PsyberRose i havent read it yet but im already hooked by synopsis this is getting into my library and deserves a nice review

        stella2138 I read yours and left a review. I hope you don't mind my critical review but I wish for you to get better as a writer. Please don't hesitate to ask me for more writing advice.

            stella2138 It would be my pleasure. I’ll read and review your story. I would appreciate some feedback myself, take your time however, my story is still short but I’m aware you have quite some stories in your queue already.

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                XOMatsumaeohana Indeed only eight chapters, I’ve only been writing for a few weeks, you see. I do however would love some honest reviews and feedback as I always strive to improve. I have left a review and must congratulate you; you have done excellent work.

                    stella2138 Would love to do this, hope I'm not too late.
                    Link: Title: My brother's friend
                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12373423206351105
                    Synopsis: Tang An is a high school student about to graduate. But everything changes when her brother's friend moves in. Battling with trauma from home, she tries to overcome her family challenges but when an unknown secret is exposed, can Tang An survive its consequences or will she die at fates hands?
                    Note: Anyone who reviews my story will get one for theirs as well, so send a reply to me if you have and leave your link :). have fun and I hope you enjoy it.

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