Share your #63 and #64 Contest Stories~
Reviewed all given links~
Orange_Rain I'm actually quite familiar with reviewing poetry on another site. You're not too bad and have an interesting voice, but it lacks a little in clarity or foundation of overall meaning spread across the poem. The ending third was the best.
purple_star Hard to review as it's one chapter. There's potential, but there's also a huge risk of being a cookie cutter story with the same story tropes. Good luck.
EmpressSK Also hard to review as it's one chapter. The perspective from the MC is your strongest point. It's ok if you can't get an editor as the writing is still understandable enough to follow the story. Also, be careful of romance story tropes, too, and put your own spin on them.
I figured the middle would be a little too difficult to understand, not sure about the beginning, but I'm glad the ending was well received. Thanks so much again for reviewing!
Chryiss I'll join the fray. Give me another three or four days and I'll have one for #63.
I have posted a part of my intended story for writing prompt 63. Have a look if you like
The Rightful Queen:
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13503059105033005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4301993775
I'll try to improve
Thank you for reviewing. Your feedback was really helpful.
Finished both, nice one shots!
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Hey! I'm new and wanted to try this out!
Title:Black on the moon
Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/13522129906165105/36298945193899401?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305561520
It's a funky weird tale I'm starting up for the contest prompt about the moon, robot and alien.
Hope the people that read it give me advice about it. It kinda sucks right now but I'm willing to improve.
Gonna read a lot of the recommended titles here as much as possible.
more treasures to read! i'll try to read them all. just waiting for this nasty flu to pass urgh XD
Just realized I didn't update the first post list! Did that now, all updated~
None for writing prompt 64 yet? Odd.
Here's my plug I guess:
The Cosmic Arena
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13491209006038705/The-Cosmic-Arena
Please take a look, let me know what you think.
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Chryiss I got one for #64!
Destroy The Moon by Hunter
Can you add to the list so peeps can discover this story? Cheers.
Note: story isn't mine. I just noticed it was for this comp.
My oneshot for #63
Title: Can We Really Survive?
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13524258905117705/Can-We-Really-Survive%3F
Please check it out although it's kinda long.
(Was it supposed to be a one chapter story or just one chapter?)
i just started reading and trying my best to leave a comment/review. just difficult to do so when my fever's on off. temp's 40-41degrees (104-105.8) and feel like floating XD but thanks for the stories. i love, love, love some of the entries
Yuyumamoru it's a one shot. it should be complete in just a chapter. i hope that helps clarify stuff
Yuyumamoru Just as schreient said, it's technically a oneshot, but Sunny (admin/mod) also said that it can be longer since that works better for blogs or dairies.