Nzoputa loved your book so far! Keep it up! Review has been given😊😊😊 waiting for more chapters!

    ImaginxryYxnk Hello. Here are a few suggestions😊
    1. Chapter length shud b around 700-1400 words.
    2. Divide the chapter into paragraphs and give proper spacing to quoted scentences.

    1. There r slight mistakes with the grammr and tenses.

    2. Try writing a lill shorter chapters first.😊

      Alaheeza I’m up for it, though it may take a while to read all 124 chapters. If you find the time to review my story, I would really appreciate it. It was originally an entry for writing contest 62, so it isn’t that long at the moment.

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          Alaheeza Hi. Have added your novel to the queue. Please give me about 3 days to read it and will review as soon as I can.

          Would appreciate it if you could review mine as well: New Life: A Second Chance

          You don’t have to read all the chapters (there’s over 100). Just enough so that you can get a feel of it. If you actually like it and keep reading, it’s an added bonus! (✿ ♥‿♥)

              Alaheeza By the way, just done the review.

              Loved the book and added to library.

              The only thing I really can complain about is that your chapters are so short. It's more of a personal issue than anything else, so don't mind me much on that.

              As for the link, it's already in the first post but will reproduce it here: New Life: A Second Chance <-- clickable link

              Thanks again!

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