647
647 ", “Pill Master Mo even dare to kill the Immortal Emperor of the Lightning Sect and pinned the Immortal Reverent using a saber at the periphery of the Gods Heavenly Chasm so why would you not dare to kill a mere being like me?" should be ", “Pill Master Mo even dared to kill the Immortal Emperor of the Lightning Sect and pinned the Immortal Reverent using a saber at the periphery of the Gods Heavenly Chasm so why would you not dare to kill a mere being like me?"
647 "As he spoke, Dao Feng’s blade in his hand started to tremble as it turned into an endless leaf blades" should be "As he spoke, Dao Feng’s blade in his hand started to tremble as it turned into an endless leaf of blades."
647 "These leaves looked harmless but it turned into blade intents as it locked up this entire space." should be "These leaves looked harmless but turned into blade intents as it locked up this entire space."
647 this is awkward "This type of casual Falling Leaves Blade Dao would definitely not be something that was learnt but a blade dao sacred art which he enlightened on his own." it would read better as "This type of casual Falling Leaves Blade Dao would definitely not be something that was learnt but a blade dao sacred art based on his own enlightenment."
Immortal Mortal Translation errors 647
17 days later
checkm8 Thanks for pointing these out. We've taken these points into account and improved on the chapters mentioned.
Please do keep the suggestions coming so that we can give the readers a better novel!