XOMatsumaeohana Left you a review. There were some things that bothered me, but overall it's a good read and an enjoyable story.

If possible, I'd ask a review of my novel, Duality. The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters. Anyways, thanks a lot, and I hope you continue your novels and growing as a writer.

      Rxel

      Me too!
      Title- Your Betraying Love
      Synopsis-

      “One day you're going to remember me and how much I loved you… then you will hate yourself for letting me go.“ ...
      Is it a crime to fall in love?
      Rosella had never thought that she would be trapped in a web of politics, lies, deception, and misunderstandings.
      What she wanted was love but received only pain and betrayal.
      It is the story of a broken Empress, of her struggles inside a place full of ruthless schemes.

      "How could you give me to any other man, I waited for you so long ! Did you ever love me or not?" asked Rosella

      "You know darling! everything is fair in love and war!" Nicholas smirked.

      "I wish that we would have never met in this lifetime and I pray, that we will not meet each other in the next one" screamed Rosella...

      Even if I fall in love with someone new, it could never be the way I loved you...

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/YOUR-BETRAYING-LOVE
      Suggestions and comments are welcome! :)

          8 days later

          Just bumping the post.. anyone else interested in a review swap, maybe? :)

            Rxel waves arms Hiii~!
            I saw you on my tree story. XD It was a nice surprise since I don’t get votes on it often lol. Anyway, if you’re up for reviewing my rewritten MWTL novel on Royal Road, then I’m up for a swap! But heads up, I probably won’t be able to review yours until after I finish the rest of my queue that I had stacked up from two weeks before when I decided to rewrite the beginning (exclusively) on RR (I have finals next week too ><). I estimate to be able to review in one week, no more than two.

            If this is too much, no pressure! (:

                Instead of Empress, I will be Emperor

                How does a young girl turn from a naive princess into an almighty general?

                "Even if I had all the qualifications in the world, just because of my gender, I will be denied the right to rule."

                She cannot be Empress without an Emperor.

                "Why can I not rule by myself?"

                She dances on the edge of a knife blade, constantly in danger from those around her, laughing before she pretended to fall off the edge—

                Only to climb back up every time, much to the horror of her enemies.

                Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13483705706014605/Instead-of-Empress%2C-I-will-be-Emperor

                If you want to do a review swap, leave a reply! I write essays for reviews, so you can definitely guarantee(hopefully)quality feedback.

                  Rxel ME ME ME ...

                  No wait. We've already done them. HAHAHA. Sorry, just wanted to disturb you on your thread. ʱªʱªʱª (ᕑᗢूᓫ∗)

                  Don't kill me ...

                  /runs away

                      Try my new novel:
                      Ghost Wife My Lifetime Love
                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/13675747706830105/Ghost-Wife-My-Lifetime-Love
                      Meng Zichen lived with his grandfather from an early age. They ran a coffin shop. On that day, a wrinkled old lady came to their house in strange clothes and said some strange things. She also wanted to propose a marriage for him. Grandpa was in a bad mood when he found out. Then something strange happened that he had never seen before.

                        Here's mine:
                        The Infinite Duo series: Bennu Effect

                        Bennu Effect tells the story of Malika; a young doctor that one day finds herself responsible to save the lives of the closest people to her and learn the truth of her life and how that will change her forever.
                        Bennu Effect is Vol I in The Infinite Duo series

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805

                        The Infinite Duo series: Perfect Strangers

                        A girl in her early twenty got an heirloom for her birthday that will change her life upside down.
                        Perfect Strangers is Vol II in The Infinite Duo series

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12690952406647405

                        Short Stories Collection:

                        Re-imagined stories of worldwide fairy tales.

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/13331174005454205

                          Try my new novel:
                          Ghost Wife My Lifetime Love
                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/13675747706830105/Ghost-Wife-My-Lifetime-Love
                          Meng Zichen lived with his grandfather from an early age. They ran a coffin shop. On that day, a wrinkled old lady came to their house in strange clothes and said some strange things. She also wanted to propose a marriage for him. Grandpa was in a bad mood when he found out. Then something strange happened that he had never seen before.

                            Chryiss I really do love that tree story (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ no problem. So I'll leave a review on RR instead of webnovel, right?

                                KhanQi Hey I left a review for you. Hoping to read more soon :D

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