RedSonia Thanks so much. I haven't been able to write anything in the past couple of weeks due to exams but I'll definitely look at the first 2 chapters again. Thank you!

      RedSonia Hey, I've rewritten the first chapter and i'd like to ask you to read it and tell me your opinions.

          Rewriting stuff from the first chapter seems a hassle. I guess it really pays to be proficient in your grammar and word of choice.

            XOMatsumaeohana by the way, can you take a look at my work. Ypu do not have to finish everything I wrote so far. Just give me a feedback here if you do not wish to review. Land Warrior is the title of my story by the way.

                Hey guys I'm back after a bunch of exams and other stuff. I'd like to promote a novel that I've been working on called Discovering Evil. I've rewritten the first chapter so hopefully things make a bit more sense. For those who have read the previous first chapter please read the one I've rewritten and tell me which one you prefer. Here's the information about my novel.

                Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
                Title: Discovering evil
                Genre: fantasy
                Synopsis:
                "Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared.

                "You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in.

                "Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger."

                Magic is real.

                There's a whole world of it.

                Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...

                On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.

                  Hey stella2138, why did you send me this? I mean thanks, but I already have a great cover. Plus the guy in the photo you sent doesn't match any character in my novel.

                    If anyone is interested, this is my novel. I can return the favour of anyone is interested in review swap.

                    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605

                    Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

                    Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

                    Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

                      If anyone is interested, this is my novel. I can return the favour of anyone is interested in review swap.

                      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13785829206271605

                      Miyeon had a huge crush on him from her highschool days and when he left, she figured out that she held no weight in his heart.

                      Striped of her title and status, Miyeon now lives as an ordinary citizen with decent life. However, when he shows up after years, Miyeon could see that her feelings for him didn't leave her.

                      Will she chase after those feelings or forget about him?

                        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

                        Title : The Arks

                        Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

                        In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

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