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Before making all those claims without proof, please note that behind every username online are humans with feelings.

The complaint doesn't even pointed out what exactly was copied.

Anyway, let's respect other's feelings before doing things. It's funny how this wasn't noticed since the book started and just now. Duh

Let's refrain from baseless attack.

Deviant1 Hopefully they continue it. It was really good.

Deviant1 I loved the book

thetinman shameless

JKSManga post for the rest of his life!

Some people really have time

PoeticPenguin

Some people seems to have all the time in the world and have no idea what to do with it.
Don't mind it, though.

Knowing something is wrong and still doing it.

I wonder how they look behind the screen. Disney wicked stepmother would pale in comparison

And don't let it stop you from updating further. Ignore whoever it is.

Give us more chappy

To run away from life. Hide, but still be seen.
I'm also inspired by some mind blowing stories and I'm real glad I take the step.

LostInFictions I feel u. I can only say it's the same with me

LostInFictions that's beautiful

Lilliny like I said after starting the thread, I'm not gonna force myself to read something I didn't like because I swap review.

Anyway, I don't understand what you mean by throwing shade. Like I said, your plot is a good one.

If you're good at giving critics, learn to handle some as well.

Lilliny now I understand what u mean by 1k and 100 in response.

I'd rather wrote 1k word and earn money than force myself to rant when I don't have much to rant about. Also, for someone to fully go all out and complaining too much, they must be sure their book is okayish.

1. Mine isn't, I'm still learning.
2. Whatever I complain about must probably be in my book as well, so acting mighty with reviews is like embarrassing myself.

Anyway, since u want total honesty; I will tell you this, work on that story again. You only have 10 chapters left, so it's cool.

I'm not gonna read anymore. It gets more confusing as I read further. The first two chapters I spoke about earlier are even better.

Since you said you just woke up when u wrote it, trying working on it again now that you're awake.

Hopefully this comment and the first one I post can meet up to your 1k expectation. Goodluck in your writing!

Lilliny 100 in response? I don't understand, but I will read the story. It seems nice, but need some adjustment.

And also, I'm glad only 10 chapters are out, it will be easy to catch up with it.

I shortened my complaint so it wouldn't seem like revenge for getting roasted, but I will point out more in the comment, so you know what to fix, that's if you wish

Lilliny I only read two chapters from your book before this.

The writing quality isn't the best, but clear enough to make readers understand the story you're telling, but that doesn't mean it didn't need some work to make it better.

I don't really understand what went wrong that made their family come to a ruin, but I guess it will be revealed in the later chapters.

The plot seems good, the catchy type to be exact. I love the dog and hope they wouldn't hurt him.

The story is good, but needs more description for better understanding, as it seems like the information is being shoved at us. It will be nice if you edit the first chapter, re read it and u will understand what I'm talking about.

Aside from those, whom aren't really big deal, everything is done well.

Since we didn't get to post our reviews under the novel, if you don't mind doing it, I have another novel which could use that help.

Feel free to speak your mind. Don't bother reviewing here. Either good or bad, leave the review there. Roast me, but please make it constructive.

I'm not sure if you're interested, but if you are, here's the link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14321476906051305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305041843

Title: It started with a crush.

I will read few more chapter from your book to gain better understanding and review it.

Lilliny and bruh, you're overstretching my words. What ex? LOL. I'm stating its based on real life experience. And yeah, not all guy are same, but hope to meet the 'not same ones' and gave them a trophy XD.

I learnt a lot from the review, thanks!

Lilliny I understand. I will work on it!

Lilliny Now, if I'm to reply as a girl XD.

I'm a female who has experience of cheating bfs as well, so I'm not encouraging cheating. Not that it will stop if I didn't anyway

Like you said, he got stab in the heart, that's exactly what I feel deserving for dudes like that.

Only few girls escape being cheated upon and bruh, I'm still hoping to meet any of those girls (they need to give me hint on how they escape it)

It's a story okay? You don't expect me to make him kind and sweet, (I'm sure I will be questioned on the title later.)

Even if it's my ml, he's gonna experience what I didn't get to do to those cheaters.

I'm not an idiot. When I write a story, I do for a reason. Thanks!

Lilliny omo! That was an epic review XD.

Thanks for taking the time. Just as the title stated, he's a playboy (that should explain a lot already, cuz I name it that for a reason, which goes well with my description of him.)

And yeah, it's two chapter and just as how it's not enough to leave a review as you said; you shouldn't expect all those info you spoke of, to be out already. XD

If you understand the content well, I stated that the he couldn't run away after taking the girl virginity and has been dating her. (He still remain promiscuous, but still didn't ditch the babe.)

About female thing y; I'm a female XD, and I'm still trying to get a male proof reader.

I understand girls won't like him that's why I switched to male genre haha. I don't expect him to be very likable and I expect that to have been cleared from the title itself. HE IS A PLAYBOY.

Anyway, writing quality matter. Yup, I'm still learning, so I will work on what you said. (That's the only thing that's useful to me in this review. The rest is just girly rant on a cheating dude XD)

I'm still building the story, u don't expect me to throw all the info you're talking about in two chapters. I wanted to do so at first, but I was told it's better to make him get reborn in the 1st or second chapter.

I'm a reader myself and knows the right thing. What I should write in a book to make it understandable.

Anyway thanks! I will review yours and thanks for reviewing here. I would have called the police if all this got shoved in my review section haha.