KENTARO12100
Hey
I read about six chapters of your book and as far as I understand, it seems you write in Spanish and then use Google translate to translate your work into English and then post it on webnovel.

Well, dear a lot of your tenses do not match their corresponding verbs and some of the sentences completely change during the Machine Translation. 🤔

Also, you don't use dialogue words such as said, replied, exclaimed etc which gives the story a feel if reading a script of a stage play 🤣

The premise of your story is interesting and unique enough. I like it but I didn't leave a review on the review section of your story since it still needs to be edited a few times to flesh out the details and grammatical errors.🙂🙂🙂

Though I have added the story in my library, whenever you finish editing it, ping me, I'll reread it and then give you a glowing review.

All the very best for your future endeavours

      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

      Title : The Arks

      Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

      In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

        Title : The Arks

        Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

        In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

          Shiksha_Jerath Ok i rewrite the principal chapters 1-15 i think now can be read, i will correct the others in the week im to tired the begining of my story was a mess

            @Yeti_man
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            @yunisao
            @stella2138
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            I would like to do a review swap with you all. Am currently writing a quick transmigration novel.

            https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

            Please do give my work a read.

            If you don't want to go through all the chapters, I would be much obliged if you read the chapters of the second arc from chapter 50 (nightmare) onwards and then write your review.

            Thanks in advance x

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