_Sha okay, I will review your story. I have two novels in writing, they are, land warrior and search for silk road. You can choose one of them depending on your preference. Land warrior is military and war story while search for silk road is fantasy.

      [unknown] OK Land Warrior

        _Sha
        Will be able to review your novel by tomorrow.
        Thanks for the review.

          Shamelessly promoting my novel here.
          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13914700306309005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305607363

          This novel is broken up with multiple series so it won't bore the readers on reading the same stuff about the MC.

          Also it gives more inspirations to write too.

          Multi genre novel based on the main Fantasy, Magical Realm and Realistic fiction around the region of Asia.

          Filled with action, thriller, suspense, romance and the supernatural. Hope this novel would make a good read.

          Thank you and cheerio~

            I reworked the first chapter.

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

            Title: The Arks

            Synopsis: In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

            The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth.

              A novel about agriculture, farming, new technologies and magic.
              https://www.webnovel.com/book/13599217205409305/Magic-Farmer-Dara---2nd-Edition

              Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

              Writing Quality - 2 stars
              Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

              Story Development - 4 stars
              Character Design - 3 stars
              World Background - 3 stars

              Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

              Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History

              But there is a lot of intimate information about rural agriculture and the way of life of farmers and residents of Small-AN.

              Small-AN is a principality known since the days of the TAN Empire. Located in Asia. Close cultural ties with Persia, China and Russia.

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                MikXL_23
                Hi this is Brandon gould I just read your book and put up a review when you get a chance can you read mine it is Demonsong and tell me what to do to make it better it is rather big so far there are 85 chapters

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