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Took me a bit to finish yours but I've done the review. A great novel. A suggestion though. If it's possible to limit the use of 'said' and 'replied' but go with expressive alternatives. A very good work.

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      Rothfuss You can also just vote powerstone/s for my novel title 'Her cupid, his cupid'.
      That would be enough..👍

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          Review the works of others no matter their genre. There's lurking inspiration in other writers' works.

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          Author: Pathway to Eternity

            Allen_Clay012 I'm interested in reviewing yours.
            In return, you can review mine or votes powerstone/s
            title: her cupid, his cupid
            let me know if you are interested too.

                _Sha okay, I will review your story. I have two novels in writing, they are, land warrior and search for silk road. You can choose one of them depending on your preference. Land warrior is military and war story while search for silk road is fantasy.

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