AlmightyKnight I reviewed it. My honest opinion? Rewrite that. You have only 2 chapters, which shouldn't be hard. Be original, instead of copying famous and overused concepts.

VateRise Thank you so much for taking the time to review it! I really appreciate it! :smile:

    Please give me an honest review - I would need it quite a bit, hehe.

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12886610505826805

    It's a project of mine that I translated from a different language but kept the sentence structure the same to match the timeframe of the plot, so there might be a little issue with the lack of pronouns/etc...

      VateRise Alright, I know that I need to rework the first half (like 9 or so chapters) because I went way too briefly over it and need to give more characterization to other people in the story. I also know that I haven't focused on the detail and focus of the environment, technology, bordering nations, etc. This is a WIP, but please be honest with it!

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/11329115905340105/The-Last-Space-King

      P.S. the latter chapters are better

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