VateRise I'l take you on your offer since I've started to rewrite one of my novels: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14254656706841305/The-Fairy-And-The-Demon-King%3A-Definitive-Version
Thank you in advance!
I will review Your novel, BUT there's a catch!
ExodusGaming555 I think I have dejavu with this. Anyway, review is ready.
Bored_Sage Yea... Well the review says it all. I have nothing else to add.
AlmightyKnight I reviewed it. My honest opinion? Rewrite that. You have only 2 chapters, which shouldn't be hard. Be original, instead of copying famous and overused concepts.
I do not know if having the novel FINISHED is a requirement, but I will paste the link anyway. Please be as blunt as you can and help me out: give me some pointers on what Iām doing wrong. I accept all criticism!
Thanks a bunch!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14294911306970805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306684050
TheExtraDoor review is ready. A good piece of work. Seriously guys, go and have a read.
VateRise Thank you so much for taking the time to review it! I really appreciate it! :smile:
I could use an honest review. That is if you have the time.
Please give me an honest review - I would need it quite a bit, hehe.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12886610505826805
It's a project of mine that I translated from a different language but kept the sentence structure the same to match the timeframe of the plot, so there might be a little issue with the lack of pronouns/etc...
VateRise Alright, I know that I need to rework the first half (like 9 or so chapters) because I went way too briefly over it and need to give more characterization to other people in the story. I also know that I haven't focused on the detail and focus of the environment, technology, bordering nations, etc. This is a WIP, but please be honest with it!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11329115905340105/The-Last-Space-King
P.S. the latter chapters are better