IceSnowball review swap with mine?

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Title : The Arks

Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

    CCmei I reviewed it. It's not really for me, and I found it confusing. I still wish you all the best.

      yaoyueyi You are quite an popular author, from what I can see. I made this post for new authors and novels really. I will skip this, as you are doing alright. Just keep at it, and 1M views is yours πŸ˜ƒ

        Dee1 I posted a review for you. Good job so far considering you are a new author. My recommendation is to keep the chapters short, but produce more of them (if you can of course). With time, when you have 80 or chapters, this shouldnt be such an issue anymore. Anyway, all the best

          VateRise ah, I'm not really that popular of an author but that's okay! thank you anyways :)

            VateRise

            Thank you for the review and reading so far! Op you're really going through and reading though the list sincerely :O
            I really respect that, since I would find it difficult to do so.

            Good luck and happy readings!

              yaoyueyi Actually, since you posted, I will review it too. Although you will need to wait a bit. I always want to read as much as I can. So if your novel is good, I will have to read loads of chapters πŸ˜ƒ

              Didn't really think I will so many links....

                IceSnowball You cheated a bit. You are not a newbie author πŸ˜ƒ My initial reaction was "wow this guy's good" but then I checked your profile, and it explained everything. Her Sole Desire. Read it guys, it's quite interesting.

                  VateRise oh okay! thank you again!
                  usually people always want free stuff so that's probably why :')

                    VateRise 😊Thanks for reading.
                    πŸ˜…I guess I'm not a new author. I still have lots to improve.
                    Thank you for your review and I'm glad that you found it interesting.

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