My English is not very good, but I want to write a western magic novel, which friend can help me to see if my English standard is up to standard, and whether I can continue to write ...

《Invincible store system》

Holy Spirit Continent, Race Unlimited

A holy mage who can summon meteorites; An orc empire with a population of billions; The alluring and noble spirit ...

Gavin Jones was reborn here due to an accident.

He also came with a magic necklace that calls itself the "invincible store system".

[Dragon's Human Gene] [Ring of Soul] [Intensification Rune] [Advanced Cultivation Method] ... Everything can be bought in

this store.

This is the story of the birth of a great god!

Of course, it all starts with Jones becoming the Baron of Flower Town ...

    I will read them all tomorrow, ill let you guys know when Im done and submitted my reviews! :) thanks!

      Title: The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Bennu-Effect

      Genre: Magical Realism/ Urban Fantasy

      Tags: Female Leads, Alternative Universes, Time Travel

      Synopsis:

      "Time will always fix itself...no matter how much you try..."
      If you find yourself one day responsible to save everyone you love against the mightiest power of nature; Time. Bennu Effect tells the story of Malika; a young doctor that one day finds herself responsible to save the lives of the closest people to her and learn the truth of her life and how that will change her forever.

      Title: The Wine House

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14534029405677605/The-Wine-House

      Genre: Romance/ Comedy/ Urban Fantasy

      Tags: Female Leads, Alternative Universes, College Romance

      Synopsis:

      Wine House follows the story of two best friends find themselves in a magical situation where true love is right in front of them and it's their choice to take the risk to fall in love or simply regret it for the rest of their lives.

        ElleJaye hello interested here’s mine

        CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WOULD BE MUCH APPRECIATED
        I’ll review your story too in exchange!

        Hello! For those who are looking for a romance-action with supernatural elements (mystery/suspense/drama) Here’s my novel: My Boyfriend is a Grim Reaper

        Link https://www.webnovel.com/book/14635911606093305/My-Boyfriend-is-a-Grim-Reaper

        Tagalog Version https://www.webnovel.com/book/13556075806298905/My-Boyfriend-is-a-Grim-Reaper-(Tagalog)

        Synopsis

        Lexine died on the night of her thirteenth birthday, but an unexplainable event saved her life from death.

        After seven years, she is now living her nearly perfect world with a great career, wonderful friends and a loving grandfather. Until one day, everything she believed normal in her life abruptly changed when a man hiding in a black hood with weird tattoos suddenly appeared.

        "The kiss we shared, don't you remember? It was my most unforgettable kiss, my little cupcake..."

        Starting from her lips, his long fingers crawled slowly on her neck, down to her collarbone. He traced the scar in the middle of her chest. She got that mark when she was thirteen. Lexine felt like she was burned by the stranger's touch, she gasped.

        What the hell was that?

        He brushed the strands of hair scattered on her face, "I'm here for my price..."

        For all the danger who chased her like a raging animal, how can Lexine escape the enemies who keep on hunting her? Who among the people around her can she fully trust?

        Fighting to live; running with a confused heart. How can she end the cursed of the kiss that pulls her life to death?

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