My English is not very good, but I want to write a novel about western magic. Please help me evaluate it. Can you understand my brief introduction smoothly? ...... Please
Introduction to this book:
Here are magicians who can freeze rivers, paladins who can cut mountains with one sword, and golden titans who can tear dragons apart with both hands ...
Here is the Holy Spirit continent, a world full of endless opportunities and dangers!
I, Gavin Jones, with God's shop, am reincarnated here!
Dragons' genes, magic spells to destroy cities, life-prolonging drugs, weapons to kill gods ...
Everything will be mine!
Of course, the beginning of everything starts from the day I became the tulip baron ...