NEED PERSON TO WRITE NOVEL ,I WILL GIVE YOU PLOT
MAKKAPATI Uh, if someone has a hobby of writing novels, why should they write your idea instead of their own?
I don't have the time to write either, but I force myself to set aside some time to write. I might be the most terrible writer in the world, but I'm not going to ask other people to write for me without asking for anything in return. And I can assure you, the moment you give your idea to someone else and ask them to write a story based on it, it will no longer become "your" story. And if you do want to read something like that, you can go read Warlock of the Magus World or Scientific Magic (not sure if that one is still around), and best of all Release That Witch!. There are also a few Japanese light novels and manga that revolve around a reincarnated dude using science and/or physics to create his own magic system (I can't remember the title, I'll have to search for it but the translators stopped translating it). We already have people writing stories about people using their own magic theory with science and technology from Earth. Your idea is not new or original.
Before you ask me questions on how he transmigrate read the first few chapters I wrote ,I am bad at writing so don’t comment in grammar
Novel name - Forced Transmigration
MAKKAPATI So he's a neuroscientist/engineer/otaku hybrid who somehow mastered neurology, engineering, is capable of constructing and building his own machines, yet still has time to indulge in his otaku hobbies?
So...basically like every Mary Sue protagonist ever?
You might as well go read that Japanese web novel about some programmer dude who got reincarnated into a fantasy world, and designed his own magic with programming codes. At this moment, there's nothing to differentiate your story from quite a few of the tech-magic isekai stories floating around. There's quite a few on the manga aggregator sites if you know where to look, and often they devolve into the protagonist being a know-it-all Mary Sue that "revolutionizes" the world, which is pretty obnoxious to me, so I drop them after a while. That's why I can't remember the titles, or I would have listed them all for you.
Dude,I think you have some disorder.i never said my idea is original ,I never said my idea is new.
I just said if anyone is interested to write,I am not demanding here,and your saying why should they write mine when they can write their own?have some sense,I will First tell them the whole plot outline and if they are interested they will take up and write with their name as author,I can’t add all the minor details in plot.
And it no longer become my story for god’s sake I don’t care buddy ,I am not even asking to put my name on story page.
And for your information,I read all those novels already.
MAKKAPATI I don't think you understand my point. I don't care how he gets to the other world or whatever. I'm pointing out the flaws of your idea, like ShinoeraPro did. You basically want a Mary Sue protagonist who's capable of doing everything, from neuroscience to engineering to building (which is a completely different skillset, and not something you can just do just because you have a blueprint), yet also have otaku hobbies. Your premise from the start is already absurd.
And I can already predict how the story will go. He will use his knowledge to make himself overpowered, revolutionize the world (or dominate it) with his new magic system, and...maybe he might get a harem along the way. Maybe you have twists and whatever, but your whole "I don't want to give away spoilers" isn't going to convince anyone unless you actually explain how your idea is different from everything else. Otherwise what's the difference between reading those titles and writing a story that pretty much does the same thing? If you want to persuade people that your idea is worth the time and attention, you need to emphasize and explain what sets your story aside from all the others, or it will just become another isekai clone.
That was my point.
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Tomoyuki
Omg,before you comment again please read the above comments,I clearly said the main point.
Why should only one person receive that transmission,there can be two,three or an entire race receiving it via space station receiver
And you asking me how he can build? I didn’t say he will build everything,you can just print out that information,and others can learn like in release that witch,and I never said he will be op,nor he will dominate with magic system,and for god’s sake do u think a doctor won’t have fantasy addiction?lmao
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MAKKAPATI ...wow, the point completely flew over your head. I give up. I wasn't even talking about the main point. I already said I am not interested in how your protagonist receives blueprints or whatever. I don't care. I know he's a Mary Sue protagonist. I don't give a f if he's a otaku or not, I'm just saying he's a Mary Sue protagonist. If you want to make him an otaku or fantasy addict, be my guest.
And in Release That Witch! Roland is an engineer, which is why he knows how to read blueprints and teach people how to build. They didn't just look at the blueprints and build, Roland actually guided them step by step and taught them. And he was able to do so because he's an engineer. See, this is the problem when people think it's so easy to write. Writing is not as easy as seeing, "hey! Release That Witch! did it! Let's copy its premise and come up with my own story!" You don't magically hand-wave things into existence - people don't just magically know how to build from blueprints. It works for Release that Witch! because Roland is an engineer and it's an engineer's job to teach people how to build from blueprints. And you only mentioned your neuroscientist protagonist, you never mentioned once that there are other characters going to the fantasy world. Yet I'm supposed to read your mind and know that there will be others? See, this is why you tell everyone what you have from the start, and not give the BS "spoilers" excuse! You turn potential writers away with your generic ideas, and the ones who are willing to write usually are those who aren't that invested in fleshing out the details and writing it properly. I hope I'm mistaken and someone can write your story well, but...
Again, before you start defending your idea, I DON'T CARE HOW HE DOES IT. If you want to magically handwave a reason, fine. If you want people to magically build stuff because they saw how to in a blueprint, fine (though your understanding of what a blueprint is is clearly lacking). I DON'T CARE. They can do whatever they want, it's your story. I only raised the example to illustrate the difficulties of writing. Writing is not something that you simply get done just like that. It requires meticulate planning, research, deep thought and practice. So if people wants to write your idea (and I don't care if they do), they have to be prepared for all that hard work for something that isn't their idea, and they are doing it for free. At their own time and expense. But that's their problem, not mine. I'm not stopping them from doing anything, I'm pointing out the challenges and difficulties that you seem to just hand-wave away with your "main point". Which is not what I'm interested in.
MY POINT: So what exactly sets your story apart from other stories like Release That Witch! and all the other stories? You have yet to answer the question. WHY SHOULD PEOPLE READ/WRITE YOUR STORY? WHAT SETS IT APART FROM OTHER GENERIC MAGI-TECH STORIES?
Stop justifying with your "main point" or how he gets his blue prints or memories or his hobbies. Those are minor details, I don't care about that. I want to know why people should read your story, and what sets it apart from all the other generic isekai clones out there. I notice you did not deny my point about him revolutionizing the world or dominating it with his new system, becoming overpowered or even the harem point (yes, you never said he would, but you never said he wouldn't either). And I honestly don't care if he does or does not - TELL ME HOW IT IS DIFFERENT FROM EVERY OTHER STORY THAT USES THE SAME TROPES!
Tomoyuki
Alright buddy I forgot to mention that MC is not as dumb as you,and he is actually smart.
He just sends blueprints ok,so mc will just write down that information and he could just create an earthly style education system and give books depending on their branch and they can build.
And your asking me how it differentiates form all other isekai and system stories? Because u are so dumb that I already mentioned twice saying that more than one person will receive the memory and you keep asking me the same shitt.
Imagine if memory transfer is possible and we both take the same memory and depending on our innate self we both can use it in different ways,suppose We transfer memory on how to make and use gun.i will use gun for protection and you since you are so dumb you will probably shoot yourself to see if it works and bring peace to humanity
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MAKKAPATI That is not different nor it is a hook. Multiple people get summoned to isekai all the time. So how is this any different from say, Isekai Cheat Magician when Taichi and Rin both get summoned? And we are resorting to personal attacks now, are we?
EVERYONE, BE READY TO GET INSULTED THE MOMENT YOU DISAGREE WITH MAKKAAPATI! This is what you're in for if you agree to write a story for him/her! You'll get called dumb and insulted if you ask him/her for more details regarding his idea! Be warned!
Instead of both of you getting angry because neither of you can understand what the other is saying, that's what you should do:
For you @MAKKAPATI you should write with a few words, like a shopping list, what you find interesting and what you think is not so good in your story.
For you @Tomoyuki, you should do the same by simply putting words or short sentences on what is good and not so good in his story.
It would be easier than making 750-word blocks x) because you are going around in circles. And then you argue, because this is a little messy for the moment.
MAKKAPATI Wow...facepalm.
That is exactly how you ask people if they will write your story. By posting your whole idea and fleshing it out. Not giving some vague, generic premise and then expecting people to approach you for more details.
Have you ever gone job-hunting? Do you tell the interviewers, "hire me and I'll show you what I can do."? No. You tell the interviewers everything about yourself, you sell your own talents and abilities to the interviewers without leaving anything out so that they can hire you. Nobody except an idiot will tell the interviewers straight, "hey, hire me and then I'll show you what I can do."
If your initial premise is so vague and generic, how can you expect potential writers to take up your task? Maybe there will be a few, but good luck getting one who is good quality.
She keeps asking me what’s different from other isekai stories and I already mentioned that there will be more than one person receiving that memory.
One may use for good,one may use for evil purpose and an entire race may get to earth to colonise after receiving transmission.
I already said it thrice and he keeps asking me what’s different blablabla
