Tomoyuki
Alright buddy I forgot to mention that MC is not as dumb as you,and he is actually smart.
He just sends blueprints ok,so mc will just write down that information and he could just create an earthly style education system and give books depending on their branch and they can build.
And your asking me how it differentiates form all other isekai and system stories? Because u are so dumb that I already mentioned twice saying that more than one person will receive the memory and you keep asking me the same shitt.
Imagine if memory transfer is possible and we both take the same memory and depending on our innate self we both can use it in different ways,suppose We transfer memory on how to make and use gun.i will use gun for protection and you since you are so dumb you will probably shoot yourself to see if it works and bring peace to humanity
NEED PERSON TO WRITE NOVEL ,I WILL GIVE YOU PLOT
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MAKKAPATI That is not different nor it is a hook. Multiple people get summoned to isekai all the time. So how is this any different from say, Isekai Cheat Magician when Taichi and Rin both get summoned? And we are resorting to personal attacks now, are we?
EVERYONE, BE READY TO GET INSULTED THE MOMENT YOU DISAGREE WITH MAKKAAPATI! This is what you're in for if you agree to write a story for him/her! You'll get called dumb and insulted if you ask him/her for more details regarding his idea! Be warned!
Instead of both of you getting angry because neither of you can understand what the other is saying, that's what you should do:
For you @MAKKAPATI you should write with a few words, like a shopping list, what you find interesting and what you think is not so good in your story.
For you @Tomoyuki, you should do the same by simply putting words or short sentences on what is good and not so good in his story.
It would be easier than making 750-word blocks x) because you are going around in circles. And then you argue, because this is a little messy for the moment.
MAKKAPATI Wow...facepalm.
That is exactly how you ask people if they will write your story. By posting your whole idea and fleshing it out. Not giving some vague, generic premise and then expecting people to approach you for more details.
Have you ever gone job-hunting? Do you tell the interviewers, "hire me and I'll show you what I can do."? No. You tell the interviewers everything about yourself, you sell your own talents and abilities to the interviewers without leaving anything out so that they can hire you. Nobody except an idiot will tell the interviewers straight, "hey, hire me and then I'll show you what I can do."
If your initial premise is so vague and generic, how can you expect potential writers to take up your task? Maybe there will be a few, but good luck getting one who is good quality.
She keeps asking me what’s different from other isekai stories and I already mentioned that there will be more than one person receiving that memory.
One may use for good,one may use for evil purpose and an entire race may get to earth to colonise after receiving transmission.
I already said it thrice and he keeps asking me what’s different blablabla
first of all i am not interviewing people.
and i didnt mention i am looking for potential writers.
i mentioned "if anyone is interested"
and many people replied to my comment,but i was only arguing with you like this because you kept asking me the same thing even though i already mentioned it thrice.
As your wellwisher i recommend you to consult a "PSYCHIATRIST" to get treated. since you keep asking the same thing even though the other person gave you the answer
Brainr0t I already did.
Number one: it's generic. There is nothing that makes it stand out. He claims that it will have more than one characters. That's not something that helps it stand out - like, seriously, many isekai stories have more than one people summoned to another world. How is that any different? he is deliberately being vague about the "more than one person receiving the memory" - so what? Why is that interesting or different? How is it different from just outright summoning more than one person? Does that not achieve the same effect (if it's different, tell us how it's different, don't just assume people should know - we can't read your mind)? Keep in mind that after all these different people receive his memories, something has to happen. That's only your beginning, how does the rest of your story differ? What kind of impact does transferring the same memory to more than one person have on the story? I don't see how it differs, it's just going to be these guys working together to build a new magic system, which is basically what many isekai protagonists already do.
Number two: it lacks any sort of proper hook in terms of setting and character. It's all right to do a magi-tech story, but you need to explain why it's more interesting or why it's different from another story, say...that programmer story. What exactly does neuroscience do for the protagonist? He is going to mentally control all the citizens in the world? Why bother with the blueprints and engineers and extra summoned characters? Are you intending to copy Release That Witch!? Why not focus on the neuroscience aspect and see what new innovation that can bring? Again, saying that "more than one person will receive the memory" doesn't really say anything. It's not exactly interesting or a proper hook. Not unless you elaborate more on it - is he planning to create a collective hive mind by transplanting his memories into several people? Are they all interconnected? Are they a single person split into different bodies? Or are they mentally linked? What the heck does "more than one person will receive the memory" even mean? Are they all the same person, or different people with the same memories? Do the different people have different talents (if so, that makes them all receiving the same memory completely redundant)? What exactly is so interesting or different about several people receiving the memory/blueprints? Doesn't summoning a whole class or summoning a company of salarymen/technicians (like in some isekai stories) achieve the same effect? Again, we can't read your mind, so don't assume we are stupid for not knowing what you have planned or why you think "transferring his memory into more than one person" is interesting. Quite frankly, it is not.
Now, to make that interesting, perhaps have his "memory clones" all run rampant and take over the world with their superior tech. And Memory Clone Prime (the protagonist) will have to run about and fight all these other Memory Clones of himself to rein them in before they destroy the world. Makes "waging war with yourself" or "inner conflict" literal.
Number three: His idea is too vague. Notice how Immovable has to ask what the story is about? How reinesse asked for more details? How quite a few people pointed out it's pretty similar to other stories that have been written before? That is why I'm asking him how it's different - because he didn't elaborate, he didn't respond much to other people's comments, and when he does, he calls us dumb because we couldn't read his mind. And quite frankly, his wording doesn't make any sense. He doesn't explain what exactly is interesting about "why should only one person receive the memory"? See above for more details regarding how to elaborate on that. If you want to sell your idea to others, you can't just hide behind spoilers, that's not how it works. Before people invest in the time to talk to you or contact you, they need details, they need to know what they're getting into, they need to know how much thought you've put it in. Just throwing a few paragraphs here and there, replying with a couple of sentences to questions about details isn't enough. You need to explain why it's worth their time and attention to actually discuss your idea with you, because we can't read your mind, and honestly, your posts don't really inspire much confidence.
your saying that there are stories when more than one person is summoned and what difference does it makes when two people receive same memory .
see if its possible to put a lot memory of one person into another person what will happen to receiver?
example person A is sending his memory to person B.
for example we imagine that person A is a good guy and person B is a bad guy.
which memory will dominate?
either the A or B
suppose if A memory is dominating and the person A can control his emotions he uses his knowledge for good purposes
suppose the B memory is dominating and the person B can control he uses that knowledge for bad purposes like he always do.
what exactly does neuroscience do for a protagonist?he can use the memory transfer technique he knew in story to create a huge plot twist.
and the thing i mentioned that "why should only one person receive the memory" it is indicating that have you ever saw a good novel where there is more than one MC with the same memory and brain?
dont mention summoning because even in summoning two people dont have same brain and memory.
i gotta admit that you are the dumbest person i ever met in my life till today
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and the reason why i am not mentioning whole story is because i already found a person who is interested in writing, so if i just spam whole story here someone might like it and just write on their own and the person who is interested in writing wont like to share the whole story with others now.
and i am not calling everyone dumb. i am only calling you .yes only you "DUMB"
Tomoyuki
if you gonna say again that its the same as other stories , there are lot of movies and books in common but even two types of movies with same concept get hit because of the way they take it and explain it.
if you say again that how will MC build everything ,remember that its a fantasy novel and i created a loop of magic to intervene.
you will beleive infinity stones without proper logic how they work, but you come here and ask how can mc create everything ,when i didnt even mention that he will do all that stuff by himself.
anyway you better go play LUDO thats good for you
MAKKAPATI I actually have read a novel where there is one main character with the same memory and brain. It had something to do with time-traveling and paradox in a fantasy world, but...it just turned into an angsty revenge fest where one guy goes around raping women and the other guy gets blamed for it, is punished, and then seeks revenge on himself. It was actually quite funny.
And if you found someone, you can just say you already did, and this thread can be closed because someone else is writing the story. Instead of...you know, calling people dumb.
and the main plot twist and the reason why it got hit is not because its a standard isekai its because there are demons and other races competition in that.
in the similar way in my story the thing thats specific is more than one person receving the information and the way things go around
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MAKKAPATI That is exactly why I'm asking you how you are going to take it and explain it. You can use the same concept, but you need a way to explain why people should read your take on the genre. Claiming that a guy transfers his memories into several different people is cool and all, but you need to elaborate why that is interesting. What is he going to do with several different people that has his memories? Is he going to wage war with the guys who go rogue with his memories? Are they going to form a hive mind? Hell, what is the purpose behind downloading his memories into several people - are they all supposed to form some sort of secret illumati in the fantasy world? I only raised the example of a group of people being summoned to another world to illustrate one point - if your guy is merely downloading his memories into multiple people to build a city (for example), you might as well just summon a bunch of different people to the other world to build the city. You won't be using the "more than one person receive the memory" thing to its full potential. It's like saying, "this story is different because a guy brings a flamethrower to another world!" If the whole point is to have him use fire, why not just give him fire magic, because it achieves the same effect? Basically, you have to elaborate how exactly "more than one person receiving the memory" is different, not just tell us "this is different!" and expect us to understand. What is he going to do with a bunch of people who has his memories downloaded in them? What happens after he does that? Your story is not going to end there, right? That's the part you have to elaborate, not how he got there. By the way, don't respond to this. These are all examples. I'm not asking you for an answer. Just explaining the writing process.
I never said anything, I already said I don't care about the minor details, you can have the protagonist handwave everything into existence and that's fine.
MAKKAPATI I was just giving an example. I never said you were copying another story. Now where did you get that from? You were the one who asked me if I saw a novel where there is more than one MC with the same memory and brain. I did. That's all.
No one said anything about you copying that story. Jeez, you need anger management.