Peachwoodgirl6 done with the review.. am reading others now. :)
Swap Review
Aysel_Inara done ..
YoureMySun this is done as well. Thanks everyone..
xlntz hey! This is mine https://m.webnovel.com/book/14442945206446105
ShinSungmi Sure might take some time since I'm trying to review a lot of other people's work.
lynerparel Alright
ShinSungmi done my review.. you can check it out. Please review mine as well. Thanks
Trust the Pathfinder
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14679199606345905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=3317756409
For others. You can still post your novel here as I'll always check this thread and give review.
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Freshly made from the oven of my imagination. The whole story is ready. Please tell me what you think?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15065424106754005
Blood TYPE: DRAGON
Hey, I just browsed through some of your books and I liked the premise on most of them. Most importantly, we are all mostly new!
I invite you to check mine out as well:
What's A King Without A System
-It's more like a story meant to focus on all the things I loved about reading fantasy novels where connections between people are what really gets you in. It's only in the first volume now which is meant to introduce most of the main characters. Hopefully you give it a chance.
kazesenken I just read yours, seems very refined from what I saw. Though I like to have a more detailed connection between my characters. Something along the lines of 'Why is it that he had adopted so quickly to the world' or 'Was there no resentment from the MC towards being taken away from his life to become a 'slave''.
Still, those could be brought up as the novel moves on. Hope you grant us the pleasure of seeing your finished story in the future! Keep it up!
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Thanks for the review. Since the MC has fallen into a world that is similar to his hobbies, he's not really bitter about being transported. It does mention in the story that he lived a pretty uninteresting life so far, and that his personality has him go with the flow of things. Also, he's not exactly being forced to do anything. He's the kind of MC that gets attracted to a nice girl and starts doing reasonable things to please her.
The story will slowly, but surely continue. I just don't have time to write as frequently as others normally do here. This is a story I'm doing just for fun.
Btw, what do you mean by "you need to understand the circumstances to really see through the message hidden behind the lines"? I'm confused by what message. Are you referring to the anime/game references the MC randomly makes?
I'll take a look at yours when I find the time.
xlntz Damn, I was so looking forward to a sci-fi adventure where the MC gets a thingamabob that makes him so much better at it than anyone else. There was a whole vibe of The Legendary Mechanic and I love that series so much. Though I won't criticize it based on that, it's a good read on it's own.
Hope you get more collections sir, I myself find fun in getting to see that collection number grow!
kazesenken I mean the lines where the characters elude to some hidden part of the story, like when the people in the house try to talk about the female lead's cooking being bad. It wasn't directly told to the reader, just implied.
Norah_Koch One of your links is wrong I think, it leads to another novel of yours.
ChuYang yes, i added wrong link.
Her Wicked CEO: How To Seduce A Hikikomori Wife?
Synopsis:
Is there hate at first sight?
Takeuchi Rie is a hikikomori who rarely goes sees the daylight. If she wants food, she will order it online. The love of her life is a manga character. Unless her house is on fire, she refuses to go outside.
Kamiyama Kiyohira is the arrogant and proud CEO of Kamiyama Groups. When he meets her for the first time at the funeral of his father and stepmother, she is cursing him to rot with genital diseases at his father's funeral.
He breaks her door, destroys her house, and nearly sends her to the prison.
She sticks to him like a koala and blames him for taking advantage of her during sleep.
They certainly hate each other, but they can't keep their hands off each other?
He is the wicked CEO. She is the hateful Hikikomori.
She is the wicked Hikikomori. He is the hateful CEO.
Who is the wicked one here? It depends. Who is at the bottom and who is on the top?
They are quite a match in words, bed, and hate.
They hate each other so much that they keep sleeping with each other?
By the way, if MC and ML are mutually sexually harassing each other, is it sexual harassment?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13271581906326705/Her-Wicked-CEO%3A-How-To-Seduce-A-Hikikomori-Wife%3F
Hi there, here are my novel
Opening an orphanage in another world
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14756838605525405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306186572
Synopsis: I got reincarnated and one thing lead to another I decided to open up an orphanage
Hope we will help eachother :)
muhammad_azmee i'll read yours and drop a review later. :)