Need review of my novel :) I can do swap review also
up for review swaps~ <3
Perverted Mage
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15471288606658105/Perverted-Mage
Synopsis:
"What the F**k!"
When Nessie woke up, those were the words she spat out when she found herself in the bed with another girl.
What? Isn't she a woman? How did she get that thing between her legs?
Why does her chest feel so light? Where did her two balls go?
How did she become a man?
Hey, you! Stop, you perverted girl! Where are you touching?
Nessie Linus was a twenty-nine years old top pro-gamer who liked to play as a male character.
She had followers. She was rich. She had wives.
[Since you like to play women in the games, it's better if you die and reborn as a man.]
When she was found out, she was killed by one of her angry wives.
Does her story end? No!
Unfortunately, she's reborn in the body of an infamous perverted magician who is a teacher at a magical military academy in a world on the brink of war between humans and sorcerers.
Join the adventures of Nessie Linus and her students as she takes over the world with her students.
Up for review swaps ~ <3
Perverted Mage
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15471288606658105/Perverted-Mage
Synopsis:
"What the F**k!"
When Nessie woke up, those were the words she spat out when she found herself in the bed with another girl.
What? Isn't she a woman? How did she get that thing between her legs?
Why does her chest feel so light? Where did her two balls go?
How did she become a man?
Hey, you! Stop, you perverted girl! Where are you touching?
Nessie Linus was a twenty-nine years old top pro-gamer who liked to play as a male character.
She had followers. She was rich. She had wives.
[Since you like to play women in the games, it's better if you die and reborn as a man.]
When she was found out, she was killed by one of her angry wives.
Does her story end? No!
Unfortunately, she's reborn in the body of an infamous perverted magician who is a teacher at a magical military academy in a world on the brink of war between humans and sorcerers.
Join the adventures of Nessie Linus and her students as she takes over the world with her students.
Sure, hope you don't mind if it gets delayed though. My schedule these is wrecking me. I'll leave a review once I'm done reading. But, since there's only a few chapters, I'm sure it won't be long for me to finish reading.
Here's mine if you're interested:
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Okay, I just finished reading yours. Despite the lack of chapters, it's a good read. It was fun and entertaining.
There are minor errors in grammar and the repetitive use of the same word, but nothing that can't be easily fixed with a good ol' dictionary and the handy thesaurus. Other than that, keep up the good work! :D
By the way, u a BTS fan? Army? I saw one of your books and it had a cover of Yoongi there. :)
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Hey Sev, u've been following my story, aren't ya? How's it going so far?
I hope you're having a good time reading it! :D
Primordial universe, primordial chaos and the void. These are homes of extremely powerful entities.
This is the tale of Jufeng, who alongside his mother, was killed in his previous life as an infant, by a dark entity whose power was like no other. They narrowly escaped total soul annihilaton due to a crystal containing the karmic virtues of a celestial found by his mother, Reena.
Reincarnated in a new world of cultivation, will they survive or succumb to the throes of complete annihilation?
Live the tale and tell the story.
ShinSungmi Hi ShinSungi, I just read your novel and it’s pretty interesting, really liked the fortune teller scene. I left a review and if you get a chance take a look at mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15378869605112105/Crossing-The-Divide
Norah_Koch Hey Norah, that was pretty interesting haha. I didn’t expect that after the few I’ve read in the genre. Keep it going. Take a look at mine when you get a chance!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15378869605112105/Crossing-The-Divide
ScrapMetal I will post the review tomorrow if u don't mind. thanks a lot for the review :)
The_Canary I'm in for a honest review swap
Here's mine https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-throne_23647413906198505
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ScrapMetal Hey do you want a swap review with me?
So, hey, I’m Velo_Namya and im the author of Hell’s One, I’d like to promote it by initiating a review swap of my book, but i want an honest review of it, a quick note though, my book’s writing quality does drastically improve in the later chapters, imo anyways, thx guys and I’d appreciate anyone who reaches out to me
UNIVERSE : ORIGIN BY Gy_F6
https://m.webnovel.com/book/universe-origin_25955818706740305
A new novel .warning stable update are not happening now but will be in future.chapters are still regularly released do check them out .at least for time pass.
SYNOPSIS
In a vast and mysterious world filled with monsters and powerful beings, the human race struggles to survive. Unexplained mysteries surround the world, and the reasons for the humanoid forms of monsters and other powerful beings are unknown. The semi-stable state of the human species in the land of Cythorpia is neither good nor bad. Despite their intelligence, humans remain weak in the food chain, constantly fighting for survival.
The story is told from multiple perspectives, including the main character's, as well as other important characters such as the villain, side characters, and other powerful beings in the world. As the main character embarks on various quests and explores the world, they encounter a variety of challenges and mysteries. He meet different people with their own problems, including princess trying to escape the clutches of her family and villain pursuing his dreams without regard for anyone standing in his way.
With a unique system of danger levels and abysmally low survival rates, the world is fraught with peril, and the main character must use their wits and skills to survive. The civilization of the world has been lost, and the reasons for its demise are unknown. The world consists of multiple continents, and between them are bodies of water, magma, mist/fog, undead misama, and the big death river.
Overall, this is a story of adventure, mystery, and fantasy, with multiple perspectives that provide a rich and varied experience for the reader.
PS: ADD THEM TO YOUR LIBRARY
Genre fantasy,male lead
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-shadows-of-vengeance-order-of-the-azure-serpent_26548129105457805
In this captivating novel, the world comes alive with unique and compelling individuals, each with their own dreams, desires, and struggles. The story weaves a tapestry of realism, immersing readers in a rich and vibrant world that feels tangible and authentic.
At the center of this narrative stands Lin Yun, the enigmatic protagonist who defies the stereotype of a power-hungry protagonist. Lin Yun's journey is not driven by a blind pursuit of dominance or control, but by a profound understanding of the human condition and a genuine desire to bring about meaningful change.
Throughout his life, Lin Yun witnessed the limitations imposed on individuals by societal norms and expectations. He saw people trapped in lives that didn't reflect their true aspirations, dreams buried beneath the weight of conformity. These experiences fueled a deep empathy within him and sparked a relentless determination to create a better world.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/stealing-girls-from-the-japanese-novel-mc_21709509205112405
Once upon a time, in the small town of Fairhaven, there lived a young man named Ethan. Ethan was an avid reader and a passionate fan of the fantasy novel series, "The Chronicles of Enchantedia." He spent countless hours immersed in the pages of the enchanting world created by the talented author.
This one unlike other is not actually netori......The protoganist of the novel doesn't love girls...So ethan takes them...Meanwhile the novel focus on why the protoganist is highly praised for his abilites