None, actually. Just a generic gaming system. I actually feel like I introduced a system for the sole reason for the MC to hate upon it. Because he doesn't think to hard about the system aspect, it hits him unexpectedly in weird ways.
Need review of my novel :) I can do swap review also
You mean like one of those gaming systems in RPG's?
Regius_Sanguis Basically.
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Anyways, I'm happy that you have the story planned out so far that way. I look forward to reading more from your story. I also hope that the ending will be good. Good luck! :)
Are you going to release more? I feel like I need a bit more before I can leave a review.
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Of course, the review can wait. I'm still working on the next chapters, actually. I'm giving it my utmost attention whenever I'm free from work.
It might be released by either Tuesday or Wed. I might even release it tomorrow if I finish it today. I'm thinking carefully of how the story will proceed from there. Unlike the two chapters I released.
I'm being careful not to rush it
kaz, the new chapters are up. You can read it whenever you want. Just replying to inform you about it in case you didn't know :)
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Hey Sev, saw your recent chapters. You made some improvements. Gave you a stone as a reward. Good job! :)
Regius_Sanguis
I'll take a look in a few days. I'm current on a trip, so away from my normal accessibility.
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It's fine. Take your time. I'm simply informing you about it, actually! :D
Oh, and I took your advice and rewrite the prologue. I took my time in writing it again and even reading it myself. I hope it's better to look at now. Now, the only thing I need to worry about is the first chapter. But I'll deal with it once I have the time to do so :)
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Regius_Sanguis
Btw, I noticed what looked like a copy/paste mistake about 1/3 of the way through the 4th chapter.
It's quite obvious, so just letting you know to look over it to make sure that you copied the chapter into inkstone properly.
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Oh gosh, thanks for that. I thought I was missing something, and I knew it was with that chapter. How embarrassing... I'll go fixed that too. Thanks for letting me know.
What I would I do without you, kaz! I think I should just call you kaz-sensei cause of all the wise suggestions and advice you've given me these days. Haha :D
Anyways, thanks for taking the time to look into it. I appreciate the help! :)
Regius_Sanguis
Lol, I'm a new fiction writer myself, so I can hardly be a sensei. I'm just more experienced with English cause I had to write a bunch for my doctorate thesis, which was in engineering.
Well, you still helped me, despite being new as well. I do appreciate it. So, thanks!
The_Canary "Boudoir Glamour Inc."
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15336520505942105/Boudoir-Glamour-Inc.
Cynk_Napp done :)
Hey, Cynk, want to swap reviews? I can take a look at yours if you want. But, it may have to be delayed since I have work. I'll read yours whenever I have the time, and then leave a review.
Here's mine if you're interested:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15393500605196005
It's a fan-fiction novel. A triple crossover of FF15, Fate series and Harry Potter. It's still lacking in chapters, but leave an honest review of what you think about the story. Hope you like it! :D
Regius_Sanguis Hey Regius I just read your novel and left a review with what I thought. A lot of work was put into it and your world building is fantastic. There was a lot of detail in your writing which is difficult to do but I think you did it well. I hope you keep it going.
If you get a chance perhaps give mine a read and let me know what you think
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15378869605112105/Crossing-The-Divide
Thanks and keep up the good work!
Sure, I'll take a look at it. The review might have to be delayed for a little because of my schedule, but I'll get right to it once I'm free from work! :D
Also, I know I've said this before, but I'll say it again anyways. Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. It really means a lot to me, considering I'm still new at this. I'm just trying my best to publish a good, and I'm glad that there are people who actually appreciates what I do, despite my inexperience. So, thanks again! :D
Regius_Sanguis Sure, let me know when your schedule is clear.
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Anytime is fine. I have a busy schedule, you see. So, I can only read when I do have the time, which is not a lot these days. So, feel free to read mine and leave a review whenever you are finished reading the story,
I'll just begin reading your story and leave a review after I'm finished.
Thanks! :D
CapTillon I just left you one. Here's mine :)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14805206106751105/Kaiba's-Prostitute
glaurunglives I just left you one. Here's mine :)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14805206106751105/Kaiba's-Prostitute
Regius_Sanguis OK! done!
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Done with yours as well. Your style is quite unique. I just wished that the chapters were a little long though. Oh, and thanks for the generous ratings and the poetry. I like it, especially the last one! :D
up for review swaps~ <3
Perverted Mage
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15471288606658105/Perverted-Mage
Synopsis:
"What the F**k!"
When Nessie woke up, those were the words she spat out when she found herself in the bed with another girl.
What? Isn't she a woman? How did she get that thing between her legs?
Why does her chest feel so light? Where did her two balls go?
How did she become a man?
Hey, you! Stop, you perverted girl! Where are you touching?
Nessie Linus was a twenty-nine years old top pro-gamer who liked to play as a male character.
She had followers. She was rich. She had wives.
[Since you like to play women in the games, it's better if you die and reborn as a man.]
When she was found out, she was killed by one of her angry wives.
Does her story end? No!
Unfortunately, she's reborn in the body of an infamous perverted magician who is a teacher at a magical military academy in a world on the brink of war between humans and sorcerers.
Join the adventures of Nessie Linus and her students as she takes over the world with her students.
Up for review swaps ~ <3
Perverted Mage
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15471288606658105/Perverted-Mage
Synopsis:
"What the F**k!"
When Nessie woke up, those were the words she spat out when she found herself in the bed with another girl.
What? Isn't she a woman? How did she get that thing between her legs?
Why does her chest feel so light? Where did her two balls go?
How did she become a man?
Hey, you! Stop, you perverted girl! Where are you touching?
Nessie Linus was a twenty-nine years old top pro-gamer who liked to play as a male character.
She had followers. She was rich. She had wives.
[Since you like to play women in the games, it's better if you die and reborn as a man.]
When she was found out, she was killed by one of her angry wives.
Does her story end? No!
Unfortunately, she's reborn in the body of an infamous perverted magician who is a teacher at a magical military academy in a world on the brink of war between humans and sorcerers.
Join the adventures of Nessie Linus and her students as she takes over the world with her students.
Sure, hope you don't mind if it gets delayed though. My schedule these is wrecking me. I'll leave a review once I'm done reading. But, since there's only a few chapters, I'm sure it won't be long for me to finish reading.
Here's mine if you're interested:
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Okay, I just finished reading yours. Despite the lack of chapters, it's a good read. It was fun and entertaining.
There are minor errors in grammar and the repetitive use of the same word, but nothing that can't be easily fixed with a good ol' dictionary and the handy thesaurus. Other than that, keep up the good work! :D
By the way, u a BTS fan? Army? I saw one of your books and it had a cover of Yoongi there. :)
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Hey Sev, u've been following my story, aren't ya? How's it going so far?
I hope you're having a good time reading it! :D
Primordial universe, primordial chaos and the void. These are homes of extremely powerful entities.
This is the tale of Jufeng, who alongside his mother, was killed in his previous life as an infant, by a dark entity whose power was like no other. They narrowly escaped total soul annihilaton due to a crystal containing the karmic virtues of a celestial found by his mother, Reena.
Reincarnated in a new world of cultivation, will they survive or succumb to the throes of complete annihilation?
Live the tale and tell the story.
ShinSungmi Hi ShinSungi, I just read your novel and it’s pretty interesting, really liked the fortune teller scene. I left a review and if you get a chance take a look at mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15378869605112105/Crossing-The-Divide
Norah_Koch Hey Norah, that was pretty interesting haha. I didn’t expect that after the few I’ve read in the genre. Keep it going. Take a look at mine when you get a chance!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15378869605112105/Crossing-The-Divide
ScrapMetal I will post the review tomorrow if u don't mind. thanks a lot for the review :)
The_Canary I'm in for a honest review swap
Here's mine https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-throne_23647413906198505
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ScrapMetal Hey do you want a swap review with me?
So, hey, I’m Velo_Namya and im the author of Hell’s One, I’d like to promote it by initiating a review swap of my book, but i want an honest review of it, a quick note though, my book’s writing quality does drastically improve in the later chapters, imo anyways, thx guys and I’d appreciate anyone who reaches out to me