kazesenken

It's fine. Take your time. I'm simply informing you about it, actually! :D

Oh, and I took your advice and rewrite the prologue. I took my time in writing it again and even reading it myself. I hope it's better to look at now. Now, the only thing I need to worry about is the first chapter. But I'll deal with it once I have the time to do so :)

    Regius_Sanguis
    Btw, I noticed what looked like a copy/paste mistake about 1/3 of the way through the 4th chapter.
    It's quite obvious, so just letting you know to look over it to make sure that you copied the chapter into inkstone properly.

      kazesenken

      Oh gosh, thanks for that. I thought I was missing something, and I knew it was with that chapter. How embarrassing... I'll go fixed that too. Thanks for letting me know.

      What I would I do without you, kaz! I think I should just call you kaz-sensei cause of all the wise suggestions and advice you've given me these days. Haha :D

      Anyways, thanks for taking the time to look into it. I appreciate the help! :)

        Cynk_Napp

        Hey, Cynk, want to swap reviews? I can take a look at yours if you want. But, it may have to be delayed since I have work. I'll read yours whenever I have the time, and then leave a review.

        Here's mine if you're interested:

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15393500605196005

        It's a fan-fiction novel. A triple crossover of FF15, Fate series and Harry Potter. It's still lacking in chapters, but leave an honest review of what you think about the story. Hope you like it! :D

          Regius_Sanguis Hey Regius I just read your novel and left a review with what I thought. A lot of work was put into it and your world building is fantastic. There was a lot of detail in your writing which is difficult to do but I think you did it well. I hope you keep it going.

          If you get a chance perhaps give mine a read and let me know what you think

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/15378869605112105/Crossing-The-Divide

          Thanks and keep up the good work!

            ScrapMetal

            Sure, I'll take a look at it. The review might have to be delayed for a little because of my schedule, but I'll get right to it once I'm free from work! :D

            Also, I know I've said this before, but I'll say it again anyways. Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. It really means a lot to me, considering I'm still new at this. I'm just trying my best to publish a good, and I'm glad that there are people who actually appreciates what I do, despite my inexperience. So, thanks again! :D

              Cynk_Napp

              Anytime is fine. I have a busy schedule, you see. So, I can only read when I do have the time, which is not a lot these days. So, feel free to read mine and leave a review whenever you are finished reading the story,

              I'll just begin reading your story and leave a review after I'm finished.

              Thanks! :D

                Cynk_Napp

                Done with yours as well. Your style is quite unique. I just wished that the chapters were a little long though. Oh, and thanks for the generous ratings and the poetry. I like it, especially the last one! :D

                  up for review swaps~ <3

                  Perverted Mage

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                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/15471288606658105/Perverted-Mage

                  Synopsis:

                  "What the F**k!"

                  When Nessie woke up, those were the words she spat out when she found herself in the bed with another girl.

                  What? Isn't she a woman? How did she get that thing between her legs?

                  Why does her chest feel so light? Where did her two balls go?

                  How did she become a man?

                  Hey, you! Stop, you perverted girl! Where are you touching?

                  Nessie Linus was a twenty-nine years old top pro-gamer who liked to play as a male character.

                  She had followers. She was rich. She had wives.

                  [Since you like to play women in the games, it's better if you die and reborn as a man.]

                  When she was found out, she was killed by one of her angry wives.

                  Does her story end? No!

                  Unfortunately, she's reborn in the body of an infamous perverted magician who is a teacher at a magical military academy in a world on the brink of war between humans and sorcerers.

                  Join the adventures of Nessie Linus and her students as she takes over the world with her students.

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