Trying to promote my novel on here and will gladly review anything anyone else puts up within reason. My novel will ALWAYS be 100% free, no stones, coins, passes, souls, gremlins, or whatever they make their currency needed!

The Alterra Project (3rd volume nearing completion, new cover coming soon!)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/14243270606809705/41870331941538614

Synopsis: A hundred years from now the Earth is now reduced to several domed cities after the last war raised the temperature across the planet thus raising the sea level.

The most common escape for everyone is virtual reality. A new game, Alterra Online, is set to release and promises to be the most realistic mecha/military/political simulation to date as well as the first full dive virtual reality game.

Gray Wilhelm, like so many others, wants to be one of the first to play. What is Alterra Online's secret? Why do players feel more alive in the game than in real life? And why is the government and Alterra Corporation working on it together?

Features:
- NO Systems, Reincarnations, Supernatural Powers, harems, or brain dead females that chase after MC.
- Monty Python references and many others.
- Believable characters

    LordSputnik I will put your novel in my library and give it a read and a review... the Monty Python sold it for me πŸ‘

      stella2138 I'll need a little more than 1 chapter to go on, can't say I can give it a good review with just one short chapter.

      One thing I did notice is that your page structure is still the same, short sentence, next line, short sentence, next line, short sentence, next line, etc. etc. Do you have Discord or Line? I might be able to help you a little bit better through there if you wish.

        RedSonia Done, a little hard to review with only 7 chapters and it isn't my typical genre, but you are off to a very good start!

        LordSputnik actually i'm transferring it. i wrote it as galaxiana but lost access to the account so i decided to transfer it slowly. the real name of the book is FORGIVE ME, MY LOVE. you can decide to read it on webnovel and then give your review on married me again wife. thanks. as for discord,i hardly talk there. I talk through the forum so after reading please lecture me here. i know my grammar is bad too but I'm really working on it. kisses and goodnight.

          Abdirah101 Thanks! I'm actually trying to rewrite the first volume little by little as I went WAY overboard on references early on. I learned my lesson thankfully.

          stella2138 Not a problem, I just bring up Discord or something else as this forum is terrible for coordinating. I tried it with a guy and we gave up and just use Line now.

          Primate Wow, that opening could be used as a reference for others about how to do an opening chapter and do it well! Consider yours reviewed.

          mugarg Reviewed, hard to do with only 6 chapters and it feels like the first one was written by someone else...

            stella2138 I'll give it a shot once it gets a little longer, just 2 and a half chapters isn't really enough to get a feel for it yet.

            Anyone else? I've given an honest review for every single person that has posted a story and link (except for the ones with only 3 chapters as they aren't long enough yet)

              Darth_Xiane Hardly a dumpster fire! I'm guessing it is for the latest Writing Contest. Very good never the less as I just finished all 10 chapters.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/15766232106002405/Trust-in-Love

                Title: TRUST IN LOVE
                By: CailinMatthews
                Genre: Contemporary Romance

                Synopsis:
                Alex Carter lives with her aunt and has been attending Woodlands Academy for three years now.

                What? What a sad boring normal life? Nah.

                Truth is, Alex Carter is not just the only heiress to one of the biggest companies in the world but also she's pretending to be a guy at school much to her parents' dismay.

                Fortunately, this sad boring normal life leaves her off the hook from the school's notorious playboys, unecessary dramas and juicy scandals. It was going pretty smoothly.

                That is...

                Until on a Monday late afternoon when Logan Parker stops by Alex's house just in time for him to catch her with extensions in her hair, make-up on her face, heels on her feet and boobs in her dress.

                Things were about to change for sure. Despite all of Alex's precautions, someone slipped inside her walls and became part of her world. For better or for worse? That still remains to be unseen.

                Join in and be part of the biggest secret in this fiction world.

                Some character tweets:
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                  5 days later

                  mugarg Added your story to my library... will read few chapters and then give you a review.

                    This is my third attempt in making a full-fledged story. It's currently on its third volume! And yeah, I hope this helps.
                    Title: The Doctor Of Death
                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15084062705728305
                    Genre: Military, Historical Fiction
                    Synopsis:
                    The time is the early 18th century and a plague struck Britain on its first week it killed more than thousands of people and time is running out for those who got infected by it they only get five days to live if they get infected...
                    A man who deemed himself as the enemy of the state dares to cure this mess once and for all.

                    Meanwhile, on the other side of Britain another force is messing with the balance on Britain and eating away Britain from the inside, what could Britain do in this situation?

                    "Death is upon us and were just standing right in front of it..."

                      HI!!!!!!!
                      I would like to recommend my novel, I'm an amateur writer but still give it a chance it contains fantasy, romance, action and involves reverse harem.
                      Warning: 17+ Content contains sexual and violent scenes.
                      The Fallen and The Realm of Beasts
                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/15089675606851205
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                        https://m.webnovel.com/book/15833859506199205

                        Waking up suddenly screaming, Alice looked around in a panic. The last thing she remembers is a devil like creature ripping her wings off and killing her.

                        Seeing that no one is around and that she is fine she tries to feel her wings. Instead of what should be there, she feels like a part of her body has been stolen, noticing that she no longer has wings. In fact, she doesn't remember having white skin or her hair being this long.

                        Forcing herself to stay calm, Alice tries to think about the situation calmly. 'I don't seem to be hurt other than the fact I don't think this is my body'

                        Standing now she looks around finally realizing she's in an open field with nothing around except for a forest to the north and an ocean to the south.


                        Will Alice manage to find out the truth behind her reincarnation and get revenge on the devil that took her wings as he killed her?

                          11 days later

                          WPC #97 Entry Sci-fi Romance
                          Title: Lady of the Future

                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15949201905496805/The-Lady-of-the-Future

                          Overview:
                          Basically the MC was a system who became a human (the technical term in the novel was Irah). Her memories got deleted and system powers were gone. Though due to 'Unfeeling' a genius could just remain emotionless.

                          Then after, she would meet her 'One' a mortal man (novel technical term for another kind of human). [Romance Part]

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