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Willsimulated Hey just reviewed your story and I did enjoy reading it though I can't wait to see more of what you got to offer.

    CosmicPrime while I am sincerely grateful for your praise, I must confess that I struggle with these myself. I left you some tips regarding your questions, and hope that they may help you as well as they have helped me in the past.

    The_Lonely_Guy
    KENTARO12100 RandomchaoS I have read and reviewed your works and would love to get feedback on either of the stories linked below. The choice is yours. (The first one is the shortest).

    On the turn of a dime

    Amidst the sand

      Sigheti Ah but those tips are helpful enough thanks and I look forward to reading more of your story.

      Hello!

      Reply me for a review swap <3

      If anyone is interested in giving a read and/or review, this is my novel.
      Its mainly Drama and Humor with Romance in it.

      Title:
      Undercover Superstar : A Song of Pyros and Snowflakes
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/14326033605988405

      Synopsis:
      Yingfei is the neighborhood's average girl.
      No magical beasts, no cultivation and no superpowers, unless sillyness is counted as one. Her number one nemesis? Math. And maybe the occasional school bully.
      No one would ever notice her existence otherwise.

      Usually shy and with little confidence, her peers can't help but ignore her.

      But she has a secret identity.
      When she gets rid of her daily average look, you'd recognize her immediately..

      Yingxue is the most famous young female artist within the North of Huaxia. With outstanding charisma and the voice of a siren, she's the country's sweetheart. Constantly showering love to her fans, she never fails to make them swoon.

      Filled to the brim with confidence, she continues her streak of conquering the nation. You dare insult her? She'll conquer you too.

      But she ALSO has a secret identity.
      When she gets rid of all the glam and glitter, no one would ever recognize her.

      The question is, is she the only one juggling this type of life?

      ———————————————————-

      Li Tian is the hottest young male artist within the South of Huaxia. With his stunning good looks and sultry deep voice, people all around can’t help but swoon. Born with a silver spoon, a deep arrogance was ingrained into his bones.

      But when he finally comes up North for a partnership with the young siren, Yingxue, his arrogance bites him back. Now, not only is his celebrity life not going his way, he’s also stuck going to school undercover.

      His only amusement being games, and the average girl he made as a friend..

        stella2138 After I review other works I will put this one in my list. Maybe I will put the story in my library for a while.

          Hi, I'm writing the story FALLING IN LOVE WITH A WITCH https://www.webnovel.com/book/15789473406069105 and please give me a chance to surprise you with my splash on dark writing.

          Synopsis:
          "The sun today will be the judge of you men, burning you and your sins, as the wind will sweep away the ashes of you fools. We witches pray to mother nature and she shall save us, as our souls are pure gold unable to rust". A witch spoke these words on the day she died.

          Centuries later a hidden tale is unraveled in the 21st century in the town of mount Giest.

          What secrets will be discovered and who is lying whilst who is telling the truth.

          A love story between a boy and a witch as they learn to bond and heal each other wounds growing together.

          -The story is basically about the tale of witches long forgotten by people, considered as only a legend or myth. A mother and son escape the city life to a small town known as Mount Giest. Unknown to everyone, the legends weren't lies but spoke of the truth. If you've ever read the wandering inn, release that witch or the great storyteller, l try to write a story more heavily character-based stories like the ones listed before in comparison to plot-heavy novels with random level up systems or gods and crazy stuff.

          Tags for my story include
          -magical realism
          -fantasy
          -female lead
          -male lead
          -romance
          -tragedy
          -slice of life

            Since it's the last day of the month, I thought it was finally my chance to share my tras-,novel.

            Title:The World seems Realistic but Why do I have a Leveling System
            Genre: Magical Realism
            Tag: Yuri, Dungeon, Comedy, Female Protagonist

            Synopsis:
            Sheila is an average girl who likes to play video games and watch animes in her free time. If there’s anything that stood out from her, that would be her beautiful appearance. Due to spending too much time playing video games till late at night, she would usually forget to do her homework which she would, later on, asked her best friend, Ria, for help. A total average gamer-otaku girl.

            Like any other day, Sheila was walking her way to school when suddenly the phone in her pocket vibrates. She pulled it out of her pocket to check with the expectation of seeing a new message, but the result was something that would change her entire life completely upside down.

            Leveling System, it was a mysterious app which suddenly appeared inside her phone. By using it, she could level up like the character in the game and become stronger. But what would an average girl do by becoming stronger? Not expecting to fight anything absurd in her daily life, Sheila slowly adapts to her new life of leveling up inside an instant dungeon.

            But out of nowhere, A goblin appeared in front of her somewhere in the alleyways. Where did it come from? Not knowing anything, Sheila ended up killing it. That night, She woke up to a nightmare where the world turned chaotic as monsters run rampage everywhere, it was a world where a weak human life was nothing but garbage, a world where strong prey the weak. She believes it was a premonition of what her future would be if she does nothing.

            Will she stand up and take responsibly to fight for others?

            Or would she be selfish and only fight for her loved ones?

            The fate of the entire world is on her hand. Her decision will decide the outcome of everything.

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14446778905377805

            Sorry I don't do review since I'm already dying keeping up with my own novel.

            Good evening friends, this would be the last day for the month of January and I hope its not too late to shamelessly promote my current novel.

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15594835105030205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305607363

            Release date: 10th Dec 2019

            This novel does not consists of:
            system
            transmigration / reincarnation
            harem
            And relies heavily on:
            Medieval England in 15th century
            History on Great Pestilence
            History on Hundred Years War
            A Haven for foodies
            Kingdom building
            Rags to Riches
            Witches and Sorcerers (Pagan)
            Feudalism, Militia and Economic Structure
            and all those olde ways of simple, hassle free living unlike today.
            * there's more to it and would be added accordingly.

            On February 2020 onwards, there would be a release of 2 chapters a day, and that would be time released all the way till 24th February. (that's the updated chapter I am working on right now.)

            There's a discord channel at https://discord.gg/SFnmXZu for those who wishes to add some ideas on the novel, to make it to one's liking. In fact, give me your ideas and I would definitely turn it into some chapters on it. 🤔

            I love to hear from you and I hope this would make the novel more interesting.

            Thank you and God Bless.

              BER5ERK hey there. I'm writing about Witches too in my novel. Actually it's not entirely on the topic but it's an addendum to my novel though.

              The novel is written in the 15th century medieval England so basically there's alot of old stuffs and some new improvised modern tech with old school structures.

              Do drop by my discord channel at https://discord.gg/SFnmXZu

              Maybe there are somethings we can share. Cheers

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