ZoomBee no review swaps allowed on this thread. if you want to swap reviews, go to https://forum.webnovel.com/d/34940-january-2020-promote-your-novels-here-review-swap/214. the only thing allowed on this thread is recommendations to this reader & the reader themself issuing reviews. if not, I will lock the thread.

on the other hand, Beyond_Redemption, it's nice to see you offering reviews to smaller authors! :grin:

      Beyond_Redemption The style of this work is quite dissimilar from the stories you would normally find on here, hence I don’t know whether you would enjoy it. However, I would love to hear your feedback.

      Amidst the sand

          Beyond_Redemption Hi, I'm going to shamelessly promote my novel then.

          It's been a while since I write but I did have a year blank and my book is a remake from the previous version. Here's the link to the book: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11341109205343905/The-Shopmaster

          Here's a short description of the book:
          Title: The Shopmaster
          Genre: Fantasy
          Synopsis:
          Your typical story where a young man was summoned to another world and began his journey as a hero to save the world. Sylvester Atkins, was summoned from Earth into a fantasy world called Aestes.

          A place full of man’s dream and fantasy.
          A place where magic became normal.
          A place where monsters roamed the world.
          A place where the strong reigns.

          In a place like that, Sylvester gained power and eventually, fame.
          He experienced many trials, life and death fight, and managed to come as the victor.
          With his strength, he saved the world from the twelve calamities.
          However, Sylvester lost everything in the end, including his life.

          “Ah… I can finally rest…”

          However, a power unknown to him took a root inside his soul.
          The power revolves around his body as it discovered the absence of the soul.
          The effect of the power was enormous, twisting time and space, changing one’s fate.
          Jake woke up once again, in a familiar world.

          ==
          It's an old novel but I decided to remake it recently. I would love a new honest review for the book!
          Thanks!

              ZoomBee I am not as talented as the likes of you people to be able to write such wonderful stories so I can't do swap reviews with you. I can only admire and give reviews on your works. Besides, our fellow yaoyueyi had specifically mentioned that this is not a swap-review thread. I have already read your novel and I would like to say that I really like it. If you can improve more on the grammar and be mindful of the terms that you are using, many readers will surely want to read your story without much complaints. I did not mention it on my review as I believe that it is inappropriate to do so, but please make sure to proofread your work before uploading them. I noticed some terms that were misspelled such as the "Hollow Cell", there was an instance that it was spelled as "Hallow Cell". The "System Deity" as well, you have misspelled it as "System Diety". Also, be mindful of the use of "your" & "you're" and "there" & "their". I have nothing much to say about the plot itself, just make sure that you convey your meaning clearly as it is easy to misunderstand details if not stated clearly. If you want to ask anything to me, feel free to do so. I'm willing to offer my help. That's all! 😊

                  If you are interested in a xianxia novel, you can give mine a try.

                  Link: The Pathway

                    Hi Everyone!
                    Here is my novel! People read it but no one leaves a comment! If you get around to read it, please leave a comment and/or review! I would really appreciate it!
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/15777297806038005/Golden-Ice
                    Oh and this is the synopsis:
                    You think finding that "Special One" is easy? It is not! I, Eleanora Alexandra Jordan Zion, next in line to be crowned the Queen of France, can attest to that. More often than not, you get rejected or betrayed, you will have to deal with a broken heart, cry your heart out at nights, and during the day? You have to try hard to live a normal life though all you want is just to die since it hurts that bad, you may need to cross borders and change nationalities to find your special one, or worse than that, if you are very unlucky, you may lose the one you think is your true love, and all of this, before even coming close to finding your special one. Yeah, for some of us, it is that hard. You don't believe me? Just read my story, and your perspective will do a 180. Guaranteed.

                      Hey, if you can pick up mine here is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13219997806168505/Exalted-Warlock
                      It is a slow start but well worth it. (in my opinion) It is a high fantasy novel in another world.
                      Synopsis:
                      ​Exalted Warlock is about a young man who you dies and passes into a different body in a whole nother planet.
                      This is his tale about adventure, mystery, horror, magic, excitement, struggle, love, danger, and so much more.
                      Follow Magnus Clade as he makes his way through Pandora: a world part of a much greater stage.

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