Probably be a good idea to post a link to your story first. People who edit for free usually do it because they like the story, not because they like to edit. Or, at least, that's the only reason I do it from time to time. Maybe I'm just crazy for not being a masochist though. And, your grammar doesn't seem all that bad to me. But maybe it's different when you're writing.

Zinni Like others said, learning to at least be competent in the English language would be the best long-term move. I believe I found your story on WebNovel, but I won't link it because it's not mine to link. However, I also saw that all the chapters were taken down so I'm not sure how you want to get help.

    Zinni

    Hi Zinni,

    Scrub editor here. If you do not mind- maybe I could look through one of your chapters?

    Best,
    Jamison

        2 months later

        Zinni Hi! I am more than willing to help you with your grammar! Although doing it for free isn't ideal, I am willing to help you out. I am a current college student who has a lot of free time on my hand right now. Feel free to contact me if you need any help! :)

            7 days later

            PriyankaSakpal No I am asking why are you willing to do it for free,
            Like it's your hobby or do you like helping authors.

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