MeriemR I finished reviewing your book. I also made some remarks in the comments. I hope it helps.

    #Title:- Not A Perfect Girl
    ##Genere:- realistic fiction
    Link

    Please read my novel and do rate and reviews
    This is my first novel written by me. So please encourage me and tell me where I mistaken as I am only 16 years old and want a proper guidance

      #Title:- Not A Perfect Girl
      ##Genere:- realistic fiction
      Link

      Please read my novel and do rate and reviews
      This is my first novel written by me. So please encourage me and tell me where I mistaken as I am only 16 years old and want a proper guidance

        @yaoyueyi Legacy of Forgotten Times

        Here is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11070379206248505/Legacy-of-Forgotten-Times

        Synopsis: Maxwell (Max) Walker was your everyday college student. Until his Role Playing character forcefully switched places with him.

        Now Max has to live the life of his character in a world of both science and magic. Suffer everything he made him suffer. Fight every battle he made him fight.

        Join Max in his journey to return home while paying for his past decisions.

        Edit: anyone interested in review swap just @ me

          Perizou Sure, no problem, I understand that it might take some time to read the novel especially when the bigger arcs only come in later on.

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