Haven't done one of these in a while, my book's The Paladin Order Reformed if anyone's interested in a review swap

    RenuKakkar Sorry for late reply. I am going to read your book in a few hours or so.

        RenuKakkar I read your book and I really like it. I am thinking I will continue reading your book later when I have enough time to read it well. I've reviewed it though.

            This is my first time posting on a webnovel forum so I'm a little nervous. This is my story by the way.

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/15753767106965205

            The Book of Letters (A slightly urban fantasy romance story):

            Postman Kurai Akumu and postwoman Aoko Ito are two lovers who just began their long-distance relationship. They promised to send each other letters every single day, regardless of the content. If one of them miss a day, the other would know something bad has happened to them. This is the story of the couple and their magical adventures in their respective places.

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              I'm writing a novel named The Night Rose
              Pirates. They bring havoc and death wherever they go. They steal from those who are not able to defend themselves and left innocents dead. They are a group of lawless individuals that are considered as thorns of the sea.

              But what if within these groups of lawless thorns hides a rose? A rose that ended up to a remote continent that is considered as a prison?

              Will she be able to continue living while still pretending to be a man?

              Or will she need to use her female charms to survive?
              https://m.webnovel.com/book/16725611206123005
              If interested a review swap tell me

                RenuKakkar
                Hello my name is Brandon gould i am the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i would be happy to do a review swap with you https://www.webnovel.com/book/16428504506014305/The-Tylingariea-Epic
                this is my link
                i already know about the grammer and spelling and punchion so there is no need to tell me
                i would like some advice on how to improve my writting to make my book better
                your review will be up shortly

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                    I'm ready with my review. I read up till chap 11, to start and I'll finish in the evening.

                    As usual I'll leave me review here too:

                    Having read 11 chapters I feel comfortable enough dropping this review.

                    The fourth chapter onwards is where I get more interested in the novel. The first few chapters weren't bad, but didn't grab me. The second chapter's meeting was a good idea, but the execution felt a bit lacking. I wanted to be invested in the conspiracy, a secret organization if you will, the excitement didn't hit.
                    And I love conspiracies. I really do.

                    From chapter four onwards I enjoyed the story. It found its element, with Fei relearning how to be alive again. The characters are good, even if some fall on stereotypical character types.
                    They are stereotypes for a reason.

                    A personal nitpick I have is the use of Country A and so on. When the story has a focus on the countries and languages and we go by letters it doesn't really make me interested. When you still call it the language Chinese at some point it just frustrates me.

                    Again I'll point out that the use of alphabetical countries is a personal nitpick of mine and many might not mind.

                    Thank you for writing this novel. I'll take my time and catch up to the latest chapter. Happy writing!

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