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I'm ready with my review. I read up till chap 11, to start and I'll finish in the evening.
As usual I'll leave me review here too:
Having read 11 chapters I feel comfortable enough dropping this review.
The fourth chapter onwards is where I get more interested in the novel. The first few chapters weren't bad, but didn't grab me. The second chapter's meeting was a good idea, but the execution felt a bit lacking. I wanted to be invested in the conspiracy, a secret organization if you will, the excitement didn't hit.
And I love conspiracies. I really do.
From chapter four onwards I enjoyed the story. It found its element, with Fei relearning how to be alive again. The characters are good, even if some fall on stereotypical character types.
They are stereotypes for a reason.
A personal nitpick I have is the use of Country A and so on. When the story has a focus on the countries and languages and we go by letters it doesn't really make me interested. When you still call it the language Chinese at some point it just frustrates me.
Again I'll point out that the use of alphabetical countries is a personal nitpick of mine and many might not mind.
Thank you for writing this novel. I'll take my time and catch up to the latest chapter. Happy writing!
