yizreel_jez done with yours bzw you really need to write more before asking for review swap...
2 chapters of one which is just an info dump and the other one is half a chapters worth is too little...

    3417 sure... will try my best.... but can you provide the work link?

      3417 uh, i don't think we're allowed to see the inkstone edit page. i can click on the link but then i get my own inkstone webpage. i think you actually have to post it for others to be able to see it/review it :d

        Novel: World of Firusia

        The name is due to change in the future.

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        Hey.

        Not sure what I should say about my novel, as it stands I am only 8 chapters in.

        It is effectively about a non-human mc who builds her own race and explores the world of Firusia and more. Obviously because of her race she doesn't have any problems eating some human or treating herself in an established restaurant.

        As far as I can foresee, the romance will be extremely limited or very 'washed' out let's say, mainly because it will get in the way and just be a pain.

        More tags: Reincarnation, litRPG, System, World-building (?)

        I would love for people to drop honest comments so I can progress in my writing, thank you!

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