Hey everyone,
I have been working on a novel that goes by the name 'The World Door'. You can check it out at: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16891921805642905/The-World-Door
All tips, plot holes and reviews are welcome.
And thank you all in advance!
May 2020: Promote Your Novel Here/Review Swap
http://m.webnovel.com/book/16902667706822005
No synopsis yet...
This story is about Earth getting merged with Hell and people transforming into superpowered zombie things...
I'll change the synopsis in the future.
I want you guys to think of a title fitting for the story and because my naming sense is idiotic I want you guys to help me think up a name...
I'm a newbie so I'll always be reading comments to know if there's something to improve the novel like wrong grammars and spelling. So don't hold back and start leaving hate comments.
Joke, don't hate me please.
I posted this story right now because I want other people's opinion to improve the story. I will be remaking this in the future after improving it.
And thank you.
MaxwellKHA Ok! Sorry about taking such a long time
bobozanga I will
ThePotatoKing I'll be interested in a review swap, will read later today. My story is called World's First Demon Lord; if you need a link, let me know!
ThePotatoKing I'll be interested in a review swap, will read later today. My story is called World's First Demon Lord; if you need a link, let me know!
ThePotatoKing done! Could you review mine?
Synopsis:
The Heavenly Dao exists.
It decides what is right and what is wrong. To act against it is to sin, to act according to it is to be blessed by its graces.
The world of cultivation is difficult, an unchanging principle. Yet there are those who are cherished by the Heavens, cuddled into rising above all and everyone else. How can this be? Why must this be?
What is moral and just? What is evil and immoral?!
WHY DOES IT GET TO DECIDE?!
So we, the Sinners, we act against the Heavenly Daos, grasp our own fates in hopes of truly overturning them.
This is a Journey of a young boy born Blessed, but turned Sinner.
The greatest sinner of them all.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16856682305508105/Paragon-of-Sin
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Valence_Lao Thanks for the review. I have reviewed your book.
KageMugen Thank you. Going to review your book now.
https://inkstone.webnovel.com/novels/chapter/edit/16908032706843405/
guys please do check it out this is my 1st novel and good suggestions of the upcoming plot are accepted.
ThePotatoKing hey I just reviewed your story, keep up the good work. And if you still want to review mines it's
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15509381605699705
bobozanga reviewed yours waiting for you to do the same...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16855712306643405/45385278147315774
yizreel_jez done with yours bzw you really need to write more before asking for review swap...
2 chapters of one which is just an info dump and the other one is half a chapters worth is too little...
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3417 sure... will try my best.... but can you provide the work link?
Care for a swap? My novel is Tales from Midas.
Would love to get into a few swaps . I’m not sure about the correct way to post my novel.
It’s called magical ties
Daoist714985 I'm down to review swap with you :) I just started myself actually.
Here's my link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16895439206795705/Box-Girl