sir_impeccable Sounds cool :thumbsup:
I would suggest to make sure that you sprinkle a little bit of the characters you have introduced per volume throughout all the other volumes, just so the readers don't forget Bayo in the final volume.

sir_impeccable
Pretty interesting. Like yue-san said, I think you should have little scenes in every volume that connect to other ascenders that are not the MCs. It will make the book more interesting to follow.

sir_impeccable that could work well. The trick is to make the characters distinct to readers in the first volume. So the character design needs to be solid.

Yep. Could do well.

Veronica8 that could work well. The trick is to make the characters distinct to readers in the first volume. So the character design needs to be solid.

Yikes... now this is getting really complicated.
The thing is in vol 1, I only introduced one Ascender besides Bayo, Vela plus two others who merely cameo-ed.
So there isn’t much distinction in them. (Except you mean Character design- )
Was planning on vol 2 starting on Ascender no. 2 for example.
But now that you say I have make the characters distinct in the FIRST volume, tsk! Which means besides the MC of the Next Vol, the characters there should have been introduced already but my Vol 1 draft doesn’t allow for much character focus besides the MC Bayo.
I’m confused!

sir_impeccable definitely interesting. googling your novel rn. wish you luck! cheers! ^_

yaoyueyi Hi, everyone... I think I get the piece.
Vol 1: Bayo MC
Vol 2: 2nd Ascender
Vol 3: Final Battle

In vol 2, I am going to keep the MC who happens to be Shin close to Bayo. Prolly they would know each other to be rather close. Like Warrior buddies who despite their distances, keep updating each other on their progress as well as their emotional rulings etc.
also this volume, I am going to do what I didn’t do in Bayo Vol.
I will introduce all the major characters, plus sprinkle characters from vol 1 in, webbing them together to keep them fresh in memory
Right? This is plausible?

Vol 3: By this volume, I am pretty sure I would have found even more ascenders that I might like or other regular characters.
Since this vol will be the finale, I’m thinking I should work it like Rick Riordan book “Heroes of Olympus” where he webbed all the Roman and Greek demigods he had written on before into one grand finale.
In the book, he allocated about 10 chapters to Percy Jackson, 15 to Hazel, 12 to another demigod etc...(just saying)
I think I should do mine with allocating chapters to the Bayo, Shin and some others to see the story from the eyes of different Ascenders while webbing them towards the same finale action.
Right? This should work!

Immovable087 Thanks! Pretty sure the luck you wished helped clarify my thoughts! Hehe

Pleasedeteme So you should take aesthetics like mine 'Undying phantasia' or seven deadly sins.. anime and manga.. where although the main character is Meliodas other characters also shine

I’m going to look up Undying phantasia now
I need all clarity I can get right now. Hehe

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sir_impeccable

21 MCs is a lot... you can keep the plot with several of the 21 being side characters. A main character requires a lot of time and detail to create an attachment to them.

A real life book that comes to mind is “The Hunger Games.” A fictional death match between 24 kids is the plot. Of these 24 only about 6 are even named. Of those, 3 or so are main characters.

For your book two have 21 main characters, it would have to be very long and everyone would have to be mentioned often. Sort of like the avengers. Each super hero is a main character, but they each have their own entire movie series. When then group up for avengers movies, each one of them has 1-2 movies that happened since the last avengers movie. You care about each because each is really well-developed.

Now, look at the DC equivalent with the justice league movie. They released one bad movie for some of the main characters, and no one liked it. No one cared for the group because they hadn’t built up the characters.

Just a thought, hope it helps.

shadowdrake27 Absolutely helps!
Thank you.
Even though they are 21 but only about 5 awould be relevant. The rest just crowd chasers.
Phew!
I get that Avengers narrative.
I thought of that too but that will mean expending so much time on just one concept.
So, guess I’ll just go with the regular way

Breno_Ranyere Of course! Nature anime has two major characters.
Naruto and Sasuke and each of them are lovable in their own rights

Pleasedeteme still going through it yet. Early to conclude
Your first chapters seem very complicated to read tho

yaoyueyi
If an apocalypse is to take place and it is led by you, remember to spare my precious kingdom.
I just became the Prince.

yaoyueyi
If an apocalypse is to take place and it is led by you, remember to spare my precious kingdom.
I just became the Prince.

So I got an idea somewhere
Kill off the Main Character Bayo and the book lead on from another character... how does this sound? Anyone??
I know killing is cruel but hey... what gives... Plot needs to advance
Lol

This sir actually your reply.
Mmmmmhhhh... Guess I will just have to use that Kamina style. Where the MC is somewhat tied to another character and that character might indirectly take the shine without anyone noticing at first
Pleasedeteme