TomGutshall
Ok, I have added a review. Over all, it's quite a nice novel which has a good potential. Just describe the looks of the characters in order for future readers to have an easier time portraying them!

I wish you all the best!

    NotUse
    I read the first two chapters. I don't have the stamina to finish it this moment, but your story is actually quite intriguing. The premise meshes nicely with your story telling. The only advice I would give you is to not spend too much time on prose. It is enjoyable to read at first, but slowly becomes more monotonous overtime, causing me to want to skip over it. In every other regard, you did an excellent job.

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