TomGutshall
Ok, I have added a review. Over all, it's quite a nice novel which has a good potential. Just describe the looks of the characters in order for future readers to have an easier time portraying them!

I wish you all the best!

      NotUse
      I read the first two chapters. I don't have the stamina to finish it this moment, but your story is actually quite intriguing. The premise meshes nicely with your story telling. The only advice I would give you is to not spend too much time on prose. It is enjoyable to read at first, but slowly becomes more monotonous overtime, causing me to want to skip over it. In every other regard, you did an excellent job.

        aNYONE CAN REVIEW SWAP WITH ME?
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/14575086605820805/Dare-to-Fall

        SYNOPSIS:She’s been taking risks throughout her journey . Andrea is a girl who never afraid of anything. Never afraid that in every step she’s been doing would be dangerous that it may take her life. Sometimes she’s been called out PYTHONS COMRADES, it attacks whenever it bothers. Aside from being a pythons comrades, she is also well known in terms of swimming. She appears scary in front of others, but would it be the same in front of love?

        “Why are you following me? “
        “I’m not following you”
        “Then, what are you doing?”
        “I’m just trying to see the scenery here”
        “ohww , just admit that you are falling’”
        “I’m not”
        “You’re so cute whenever you act like that.”
        “....... “

          aNYONE CAN REVIEW SWAP WITH ME?
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/14575086605820805/Dare-to-Fall

          SYNOPSIS:She’s been taking risks throughout her journey . Andrea is a girl who never afraid of anything. Never afraid that in every step she’s been doing would be dangerous that it may take her life. Sometimes she’s been called out PYTHONS COMRADES, it attacks whenever it bothers. Aside from being a pythons comrades, she is also well known in terms of swimming. She appears scary in front of others, but would it be the same in front of love?

          “Why are you following me? “
          “I’m not following you”
          “Then, what are you doing?”
          “I’m just trying to see the scenery here”
          “ohww , just admit that you are falling’”
          “I’m not”
          “You’re so cute whenever you act like that.”
          “....... “

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