JustLikeWriting777 you can keep writing what Joey do after finding about the secret may be he will expose will or keep it as secret for him and one day the truth come out. These are my thoughts after reading it. Don't mind if I said to much 😁😁😁😁. It's small suggestion😊😊😊.

    itsmeTuba no no that novel is meant for a contest and your review is really helpful. Thanks a lot

      SolAce I've done an honest and critical review. Hope it helps in improving your novel!

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