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    Book Title (Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination)

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    "If I can't conquer your heart, I will conquer your land."

    He smirks in the heat of the moment, with drumming heart and trepidation from those audacious words he just declared.

    And finally, he dealt a spit for his last growl:
    "This world shall know Domination!"

    An Ex-General punished with a death sentence, transmigrated from the present back to the past years before his country was colonized.

    Or so he thought?

    Armed with the experience and knowledge as a General, he declares to conquer the world!

    Read as the story befitting of its title, unravels the mysteries of this newfound world, how will he conquer everything in his path to domination? The story behind his punishment, and the people that surround him.

    A Glorious Saga that re-writes history!
    ...

    This is my first novel on this platform, may you like reading my novel!

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/veiled-saga%3A-conquest-and-domination_17653481206236305

      Thanks, I'd love honest criticism I'm trying to improve, not sure whether my style is adequate.
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