I re-read your story, and I must say, it looks better than the last time I
re- read this. However, some of your sentences are confusing because the word placement was off, so please be sure that your sentences are in the SVO order instead of SOV. There are fewer grammatical errors when it comes to dialogue, but it could still use some work. Besides these things, your story is on the way to becoming a great read!
September 2020: Review Swap Here
FLORA_BARUA
I already did! I can't wait to see what you going to do in the next chapters!
Aciee_GelaTin
Sure I can give it a look! i will leave you mine so give it a read when you got time =)
Title:Endbringer
Join Ezekiel keeper in a word were magic lives and the land runs red with blood. Follow him on his journey of power to protect what he loves.will he be able to become stronger than the force that drives him? Or will he fall into the abyss that us hate and despair.
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Future_M_Animator I left you a review.
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s8a4o10101 sure I did yours here is mine
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Future_M_Animator sure did yours here is mine
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Gery_ I left you a review.
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Sun23 I finished your review
RenuKakkar hi there! I have reviewed your book. Can you do the same for me??
Here is my book.
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RJMidnight A bit late, but finished. Thanks for reviewing! Keep up the good work.
Gery_ I left you the review. Can you do the same for me?
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Hi everyone out here. I have almost reviewed each and every book but if I have left out anyone's book please massage me again. Sorry for inconvenience.
Future_M_Animator Finished! Still in progress, but interesting plot! Keep up the good work!