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The Almighty Creation

Sypnosis:

He tried to hold water in his fist
But it only wet his sweaty palm;

He tried to hold air in his fist
And it dried his wet hand;

He tried to hold fire in his empty fist
But it left him with a burning sensation;

He then tried to hold sand in his fist
And it slipped not before giving relief;

He realized Universe could not be held
But it could be felt and sensed.

...

What if someday you find out that there are gaps in the Universe? Society isn't as you Imagine. This is all a Facade.

There are gaps in the universe. A boy with bad luck finds a gap without his knowledge.

Follow the life of this boy to find out the secret of the Universe and the mystery of Life.

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    I really liked the details you put into your story :)

      Title: Eein Saga
      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/eein-saga_17798956606100205

      Genre: Historical fantasy, Fiction, tragedy, Action, Politics, Dark, Adventure

      Synopsis:

      In the far desert lands of Eein, A tale of a mysterious spring holding the source to great power bears fruit in many nations' ears and leads to the forceful annexation of the Eein Province through war. A sect operating for 250 years finds itself colliding at the edge of the sword with the church evoking a crusade against them.

      On the Brink of extinction. The sect Ordinates a new batch of assassins.
      Seeking revenge, a young prospect Aya a foreign refugee finds herself thrusted into the new world. The tale and finds herself indoctrinated into the sect, launching her into the middle of the feud. During civil turmoil. She struggles to find herself and protect those she cares for.

      Slowly she starts to carve out her name in the band of assassins to eventually avenge her parents death, and survive with the new unprecedented power she gains and journeys to unbind herself from lies, manipulation, slavery and the horrors of the past. As well as all those that seek to enslave her in hopes of finding the source of her power.
      Journeying across the world to Explore and free her province with the help of her childhood friends and new aquintances she meets along the way.

      Thank you in advance for anyone who checks out my book, if you have time drop a review or some criticism but more importantly..
      Pls Enjoy reading.....
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