Honestly, I could use some reviews and constructive criticisms on my book :)

cover: https://64.media.tumblr.com/1fcc338842b9dabcdf3f104fd34c62a0/f6ff701efdd83cb9-9c/s2048x3072/00d539ba2a6d2fb340c803a713eabe41b5555ba0.png

Title: A Thousand Secret Kisses
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-thousand-secret-kisses_17909874506645805
Genre: Romantic Fantasy

Synopsis:
(This novel is set in modern times)

"One kiss wouldn't hurt, right?"

All Emilie wanted was to get home and wrap herself in her warm blanket with a packet filled with sugary heaven from her Dad's bakery, but it seemed fate had other plans.

Paired up with a boy who was physically incapable of love, and she who only knew so much from movies and novels, Emilie Bernard and Daniel Kim were given a task to help speed up the process of romance for others.

And if they failed, it could spell disaster for love and humanity as we knew it.

.........

I'm very open to creative criticism <3

    winterdaisy55 I will put your novel in my library just in case. I will post a review once I am done with the others.

        DO GIVE SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM GUYS

        The Almighty Creation

        Sypnosis:

        He tried to hold water in his fist
        But it only wet his sweaty palm        ;

        He tried to hold air in his fist
        And it dried his wet hand        ;

        He tried to hold fire in his empty fist
        But it left him with a burning sensation        ;

        He then tried to hold sand in his fist
        And it slipped not before giving relief        ;

        He realized Universe could not be held
        But it could be felt and sensed        .

        ...

        What if someday you find out that there are gaps in the Universe? Society isn't as you Imagine. This is all a Facade.

        There are gaps in the universe. A boy with bad luck finds a gap without his knowledge.

        Follow the life of this boy to find out the secret of the Universe and the mystery of Life.

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-almighty-creation_17932911306750305

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          I really liked the details you put into your story :)

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