MzMysteryy Huggles, making sure i haz book in my library. Thank you for compliment. Might as well enjoy life and be merry about it. Smiles are free and priceless.

PrincessDustbunny It's sci-fi because it's in the future, but there is no space. It's in between dystopia and urban romance, with the dystopian part vaguely mentioned in the first chapters.
I hope you'll give it a try, though...
Well, I'd like to hear honest opinions, that's it. If you point out errors, be it grammar or plot, I'm happy as well. It's my first novel and I'd like to make it at least readable. I like critics, but it's difficult to get some honest feedback

P.S.: I hope your ankle is getting better :)

a month later

PrincessDustbunny Hello, sorry for disturbing but I've seen the comments on this thread. I just wanted to ask whether you forgot about my book or you didn't like it? If it's the latter, might you tell the principal reason? (for research purpose)

    4 days later

    H41 yes! Still taking books. I try not to overload the authors with suggestions and i also want feedback. Might need reminders on the type of service requested. You want to communicate with me as author and reader. wiggles it's so fun when i get to banter back and forth. It's like high fives and penpals.

      Ysabel_xox don't feel shameful. Offer will stay up as long as i am reading in this app. I just jump around and rarely focus on one book if it's editing vs first reactions and comments. Please remind me of services requested if i start editing out of habbit. πŸ˜‚ i love authors that are dedicated to their work and i want you all to snag more readers and votes. Don't want to ignore anyone that likes penpals.

      This is such a rare opportunity to interact with writers. Makes the stories more personal, detailed and emotional.

      13 days later

      Hello!

      I love your intro by the way :'-)

      I am a new writer on this platform and is looking for people who would like to review my Novel; Roses Are Red, War Is Black!

      It follows a different species main protagonist as they trudge through a divided world amongst humans and trolls. There will be romance, bloodshed, and slow character development!

      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18765450505913905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315044108

      This book is currently participating in the Underdog Protagonist writing contest! So the book is brand new and in need of Votes/Comments/Reviews! If you're interested, please check it out before the contest is over!

      -KannySenpai

        Title- "Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life"
        Self Intro- The story is full of suspense and mystery with love and character development. Strong FL
        Synopsis- Bai Chang is a reincarnation of herself but from many centuries in future. She opens her eyes to find herself in our current world (to past). A mysterious accident tangles her path with our reserved CEO of the Hu Corporations- Hu Qiang.
        Now waking up from the coma after three years, she is amnesic so her memories are blank and Hu Qiang wants to be a part of her life to protect her from her past as she is his wife and mother of his child.
        Follow Bai Chang on her adorable journey to her second life.
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/redeeming-the-golden-ticket-to-life_18273325906147205

        I would really like a chatty reader, with whom I could chat conspiracy theories about my main characters.
        Hope to see you soon.

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