AxlSLL
Please review mine too if you have time.
There are only 4 chapters at the time of writing this reply but your review will help immensely to correct future mistakes.
Title: War of Amnos
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    @AxlSLL Thank you very much for your honest review. I will study hard and practice my grammar as you suggested. I really appreciated your review. Once again, thank you! :)

    AxlSLL Hey there, it's just been a day and I'm eagerly looking for honest feedback as well as racking up a few more reviews to make it ten :D I hope that perhaps you're not too overwhelmed with requests as I make mine which is just four chapters (first chapter is skippable) And err... this photo came from my own forum post about Halloween Spooktober

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