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  • Oct 15, 2022
  • Joined Oct 22, 2020
  • Ninestar619_5803
    Hi there, sorry for the late review. Was a little busy irl. The story was great albeit with a little inconsistency. I have mentioned it in both the review and the chapter comment. Other than that the story was awesome and would definitely follow it along. Thank you

    • @Nadia_M01
      Hi, I would like to review swap with you. And with anyone else who is interested.

      Review Swap

      Title - Kingmaker from Mistnar
      Genre - Fantasy(Male-Leading)
      Tags - Kingdom Building, Magic, Villain
      Link - Kingmaker from Mistnar

      Synopsis

      There is no free meal in the world of Pangaea.
      Every action has it’s consequences.
      Every boon has it’s bane.
      And every gift has a price.
      It is a world rife with plentiful resources, beautiful women and dashing heroes but at the end of the day, behind all the glamour and gilded statues, the world of Pangaea is nothing but a dog-eat-dog world. People here converge in groups, governments form, dynasties rise and logic and reasoning rules everyone’s action. And yet… when selfish interests are injured, people throw their gilded appearances out of the window as they delve into something that can only be considered barbaric.
      Even their barbarism is shaped by cold, hard logic.
      But how could the Gods allow such acts?
      By condoning their acts, the Gods instill legitimacy in Their follower's actions, blessing Their followers to fight in Their name, kill in Their name and claim victory in Their name.
      The Gods crave nothing but recognition, faith and fame. Mortal resources doesn’t attract their gaze but millions of mortals chanting their names and sacrificing untold amount of resources in their names does. The Gods crave faith and glory.
      Unfortunately or fortunately, depending on who one might ask, the Gods of the Divine Pantheon finally met their match.
      Foreign entities from a tainted wastelands have emerged on the northernmost boundaries of Pangaea. Worshiping tainted divinities, the men of the north are rewarded with twisted powers. Their dark patrons have little consideration for the lives of their followers. The Dark Gods have invaded Pangaea with force and intent. And it is going to take more than just heroes and legends to stop their advances.


      P.S: Reply to this message for review swap. I will gladly provide you with your reviews within 24 hours.
      Thank you

      • Hi guys, rookie writer here. Here's my novel. Hope you guys like it and do please share your thoughts. Your constructive criticism will go a long way.
        Title - Kingmaker from Mistnar
        Genre - Fantasy(Male-Leading)
        Tags - Kingdom Building, Magic, Villain
        Link - Kingmaker from Mistnar

        Synopsis

        There is no free meal in the world of Pangaea.
        Every action has it’s consequences.
        Every boon has it’s bane.
        And every gift has a price.
        It is a world rife with plentiful resources, beautiful women and dashing heroes but at the end of the day, behind all the glamour and gilded statues, the world of Pangaea is nothing but a dog-eat-dog world. People here converge in groups, governments form, dynasties rise and logic and reasoning rules everyone’s action. And yet… when selfish interests are injured, people throw their gilded appearances out of the window as they delve into something that can only be considered barbaric.
        Even their barbarism is shaped by cold, hard logic.
        But how could the Gods allow such acts?
        By condoning their acts, the Gods instill legitimacy in Their follower's actions, blessing Their followers to fight in Their name, kill in Their name and claim victory in Their name.
        The Gods crave nothing but recognition, faith and fame. Mortal resources doesn’t attract their gaze but millions of mortals chanting their names and sacrificing untold amount of resources in their names does. The Gods crave faith and glory.
        Unfortunately or fortunately, depending on who one might ask, the Gods of the Divine Pantheon finally met their match.
        Foreign entities from a tainted wastelands have emerged on the northernmost boundaries of Pangaea. Worshiping tainted divinities, the men of the north are rewarded with twisted powers. Their dark patrons have little consideration for the lives of their followers. The Dark Gods have invaded Pangaea with force and intent. And it is going to take more than just heroes and legends to stop their advances.


        P.S: Please give my book a read. I am trying something new and trying to diverge from the beaten path in webnovel.
        Thank you

        • Hi guys, rookie writer here. If anyone is looking for review swaps, please reply to this message. But till then, here's my novel. Hope you guys like it and do please share your thoughts.

          Review Swap

          Title - Kingmaker from Mistnar
          Genre - Fantasy(Male-Leading)
          Tags - Kingdom Building, Magic, Villain
          Link - Kingmaker from Mistnar

          Synopsis

          There is no free meal in the world of Pangaea.
          Every action has it’s consequences.
          Every boon has it’s bane.
          And every gift has a price.
          It is a world rife with plentiful resources, beautiful women and dashing heroes but at the end of the day, behind all the glamour and gilded statues, the world of Pangaea is nothing but a dog-eat-dog world. People here converge in groups, governments form, dynasties rise and logic and reasoning rules everyone’s action. And yet… when selfish interests are injured, people throw their gilded appearances out of the window as they delve into something that can only be considered barbaric.
          Even their barbarism is shaped by cold, hard logic.
          But how could the Gods allow such acts?
          By condoning their acts, the Gods instill legitimacy in their actions, blessing Their followers to fight in their name, kill in their name and claim victory in their name.
          The Gods crave nothing but recognition, faith and fame. Mortal resources doesn’t attract their gaze but millions of mortals chanting their names and sacrificing untold amount of resources in their names does. The Gods crave faith and glory.
          Unfortunately or fortunately, depending on who one might ask, the Gods of the Divine Pantheon finally met their match.
          Foreign entities from a tainted wastelands have emerged on the northernmost boundaries of Pangaea. Worshiping tainted divinities, the men of the north are rewarded with twisted powers. Their dark patrons have little consideration for the lives of their followers. The Dark Gods have invaded Pangaea with force and intent. And it is going to take more than just heroes and legends to stop their advances.


          P.S: Reply to this message for review swap. I will gladly provide you with your reviews within 24 hours.
          Thank you

          • Thanks a lot to @Alpha_Medic for creating such a nice thread. Honestly, due to the rarity of my book's genre and my terrible writing style, my book rarely got any notice which makes me feel all lonely and dejected. So, here's a promotion to liven things up. Though, apologies ahead for crossing the 30k word limit.
            Hope you will excuse this small transgression and give my book a read if it suits your palate.
            ...
            Title : War of Amnos

            Genre : Fantasy, MAGICAL REALISM, Gore, Adventure, Shounen

            alternatetext

            ...
            A few lines of summary.

            Amnos, an orphan of the City of Kroux, living in the Starry Night Orphanage with a dark history has a terrible hatred and apprehension towards all beastkins and monster-kind. Fuelled by his unparalleled ambition of becoming a warrior, hidden bloodthirst, and unfathomable love towards his siblings, he joins the Dread Vanguard in an attempt to change the fates of his brothers and sisters while unearthing his mysterious past.

            A word of caution: I know the entire first volume is loosely written and often hard to understand but please don't be afraid to leave a comment about which part felt bad. I would try my best to correct it (I'm a lonely writer with no one to help proofread or edit.)
            Soo.... that's it. I guess. Hope you will like my novel and help me uplift and do justice to the characters.

            • You can't delete it if I'm sure. There is no option to delete.

              • moonmato I have reviewed your novel. It was a fun read, unfortunately I couldnt read it before you reworte it so I dont know anything about the plot. Kinda excited!

                • Anyone wants to review swap please ping me!

                  TITLE: War of Amnos

                  alternatetext

                  Genre:

                  • Magical Realism

                  • Adventure

                  • Blood and Gore

                  • Fantasy

                  Synopsis:

                  The Ancient World was a treacherous place to live. Hundreds of races all trying to gain the favor of their respective gods, violence raged throughout the lands as races without the favor of a god were died out either violently in battle or slowly by attrition.

                  One such race was the human race.

                  Created by Gaia, the Goddess of Earth and Life, humanity was created on a whim, an experiment in today's term but with only two specialties, their intelligence which far surpassed their species and emotion, something which had only been limited to Gods thus far. The emotion of love.

                  They were supposed to represent the love she had for life and all living beings. She didn't give them many things but what she gave them, they utilized them to their utmost, shocking the Goddess many times over with their epic tales, songs and dances. They slowly gained her favor but it was all futile.

                  For in the Ancient World of Pangeia, there was no place for a race based on emotions, especially if that emotion was love. In fact, their act did nothing but anger the other Gods, also known as the Orokins who deemed humanity as nothing but copy cats.

                  Humanity was swarmed and slaughtered by the different races, favored by the Orokins, the Race of Gods. Ultimately, Hermanz, the God of Civilization and a High God of the Pantheon gifted humanity the ability to form settlements and cities to protect themselves from external harm, under the relentless begging of Goddess Gaia. But it only helped in congregating humans in a small spot. One could argue whether it was a good thing or not for beyond the walls blessed by Hermanz, humans were nothing but livestock to be hunted and feasted and if, by any chance, his walls fell to a horde of beasts, what awaited hundreds of thousands of human was nothing but slaughter.

                  But it was going to change as a new lord of humans would rise and forever change the order of this world.

                  His name was Amnos. And he brought War to the continent.

                  NOTE: Guys, it took me hella long to do these formattings. So please, do this old man a favor and give his book a look. LOL XD. Anyway, have a happy day!!!

                  • TITLE: War of Amnos

                    alternatetext

                    Genre:

                    • Magical Realism

                    • Adventure

                    • Blood and Gore

                    • Fantasy

                    Synopsis:

                    The Ancient World was a treacherous place to live. Hundreds of races all trying to gain the favor of their respective gods, violence raged throughout the lands as races without the favor of a god were died out either violently in battle or slowly by attrition.

                    One such race was the human race.

                    Created by Gaia, the Goddess of Earth and Life, humanity was created on a whim, an experiment in today's term but with only two specialties, their intelligence which far surpassed their species and emotion, something which had only been limited to Gods thus far. The emotion of love.

                    They were supposed to represent the love she had for life and all living beings. She didn't give them many things but what she gave them, they utilized them to their utmost, shocking the Goddess many times over with their epic tales, songs and dances. They slowly gained her favor but it was all futile.

                    For in the Ancient World of Pangeia, there was no place for a race based on emotions, especially if that emotion was love. In fact, their act did nothing but anger the other Gods, also known as the Orokins who deemed humanity as nothing but copy cats.

                    Humanity was swarmed and slaughtered by the different races, favored by the Orokins, the Race of Gods. Ultimately, Hermanz, the God of Civilization and a High God of the Pantheon gifted humanity the ability to form settlements and cities to protect themselves from external harm, under the relentless begging of Goddess Gaia. But it only helped in congregating humans in a small spot. One could argue whether it was a good thing or not for beyond the walls blessed by Hermanz, humans were nothing but livestock to be hunted and feasted and if, by any chance, his walls fell to a horde of beasts, what awaited hundreds of thousands of human was nothing but slaughter.

                    But it was going to change as a new lord of humans would rise and forever change the order of this world.

                    His name was Amnos. And he brought War to the continent.

                    NOTE: Guys, it took me hella long to do these formattings. So please, do this old man a favor and give his book a look. LOL XD. Anyway, have a happy day!!!

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