H41 done reviewing yours, great job on your story I love it the story progression is smooth the characters is well emphasize and delivered I love it. keep up the good work I will read more if I got free time for now I am on run to update more chapters into my second book not in this platform is on another platform, great job again author nim, thank you for reviewing my book in advance.

    Title: Infinite Realms
    Chapters (currently): 9

    Synopsis:

    “Han Gyeol is the most powerful right now. He can't win this war.” The Mother Queen Said feeling concerned.

    “Ma'am you can see the future...so please tell us will he be able to defeat him or not...?” Her minister asked her.

    “I can't...his future is changing every minute. I'm helpless this time.”

    The man whose fate is difficult to be even decided by Almighty. Will he be able to triumph over the dark force trying to slaughter him...?

    "This low key job..?” The man chuckled while panting.
    "You really think that could've helped to hide you from me."

    "I never tried to hide from anyone." He replied.
    "You still have time, back off now, or you'll regret."
    "You- you think you can beat me." The man laughed out loud.

    "I've practised my every move a thousand times just thinking about you. And you....who doesn't even know what powers you possess is challenging me, the one whom the whole kingdom wants to catch. The one who even possess the willow wand. You're a fool. JUST. LIKE. YOUR. DAD!"

    As soon as the man let these words slip out of his mouth he lost his temper and yelled,
    "SHUT UP YOU FCKING SSHO-"

    Before he could even finish the man spelt a spell and soon a bright yellow ray emerged and embedded itself in his chest.

    "Ah!" He exclaimed softly as he fell on the ground.

    Every memory flashed in front of him, the memory of his mother like boss, his parents, the memory of his loved one..and a tear escaped from his flooded black eyes...

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      Hi guys. Please review the first 3 chapter of my novel called big feelings.

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      Review mine and I’ll review yours. It’s about many people going through different things at different stages of their lives. The first 3 are only dedicated to the first character. Thanks

        stupidboi100 Yes I saw your review I will do yours later when I got back from home Im out right now dont worry I will review it <3 thank you for your review.

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